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vandana
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0 posted 2000-11-16 11:48 AM



Goodbye ,when you say,
you want to leave me behind,
goodbyes hurt you
when you hear them,

   Last night,
I dreamnt that
I was with you,
hold you so tight,
I whispered the words of love,
Saying I love you,

The day you went away,
My heart is empty,
I can't live,
without you,my love,

I believe all that
love can bring ,
Iam all in love,
I can give all the love
I can,

When you love someone so deeply,
Then they become yours,
When you feel so deep
to watch them grow slowly,

Iam wishing for you,
to be with me,
I want you here
besides me,
holding arms together,

    I always think about you,
though you're far,
my arms are begging
to hold you tight,

When I saw your face,
I fell in love with you,
you sit there
and I will keep watching you,
let sun shine
In your eyes,

I still remember you,
with your smile on the face,
you were my friend
you were everything I had.......

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1 posted 2000-11-16 12:19 PM


I know this so well.....wonderful poem!   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-11-16 09:50 PM


Great poem. I know this topic was hard to write about.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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