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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My search I climbed and probed mountains where the air is very rare Searched banyans in the canyons in the valleys that are there Stood upon the moon were a fanion does not wave. Explored the churning oceans as a lover and a knave. Sat upon a dragons back and made the demons slack away Even walked the halls of hell for quite a dreadful stay But all I found was darkness in the darkest of the night With shadows chasing shadows in the smallest ache of light. She lives here in my fantasy a phantom of my wile And I am building wings to fly to cover it in style I'll fly the abyss from top to bottom for only just one kiss And know if I hone in on her I simply cannot miss. Nothing is impossible once you set your mind. And I have pushed the button go and signed the underlined. I will search the entities for all that I am worth For the sweetest little lady fair that ever walked this earth. If you can't digest these declaration placed in close array Then strike out all the doubted parts and let the rest to stay. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is beautiful........*SIGH*.....every girl needs a guy like you!  -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I shall strike nothing... and I'll bet you wove the finest stories your children ever heard... you are....amazing....{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I greatly enjoyed this read. Wonderful, with a story quality that takes me back in time when the tongue told stories, instead of tv and video games and let the imagination soar. Well done. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Why thank you Sea. Karilea, Sweet comment. *L* Dragonpoe, Exactly thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sat upon a dragons back and made the demons slack away Even walked the halls of hell for quite a dreadful stay But all I found was darkness in the darkest of the night With shadows chasing shadows in the smallest ache of light. She lives here in my fantasy a phantom of my wile And I am building wings to fly to cover it in style I'll fly the abyss from top to bottom for only just one kiss And know if I hone in on her I simply cannot miss. ================== If you can't digest these declaration placed in close array Then strike out all the doubted parts and let the rest to stay. ============ WHO in their right mind would doubt a word from you ...  this is the coolest weave my eyes have taken in ... "She lives here in my fantasy a phantom of my wile And I am building wings to fly to cover it in style" yes you are...in stlyle ...indeed. awesome poem Sy-guy... "Searched banyans in the canyons in the valleys that are there Stood upon the moon were a fanion does not wave." WAY COOL verbiage here.... all this for a kiss???? wow...makes a girl wonder what ya would do for a *winkiewinkie* LOL later-love-your-wile-gator jm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are always a delight to read and for a winkiewinkie I'd be a grateful doneedonee and tweedledee all the way home. *L* Sy |
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