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SEA
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Smile on my face
Rain in dark grey skies today
Puddles to play in
~SEA~
© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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Enjoyed it!!!!!!!!
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Lovely haiku!
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Much nicer to SEA you smile
MUCH nicer.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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Vandana~ thanks  

PM~ glad you think so, thank you  

Interloper~ smiles are free in the rain....

-SEA
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lovely haiku, dear
gray fills sky here, too, yet dry
chill bites elbows, sharp!
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VAS~ Love it!   -SEA
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Sea-
loved this! excellent haiku...you
are very talented. take care.
~amy~
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SEA-
   i wanna go puddle-jumpin'!!  
   love this.  

   hugs,
   -vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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Me too, me too!!!  

This is great SEA; makes me want to get out and play in the rain; course everyone here thinks I'm crazy cause I love it when it rains and storms...I really love storms!!!



Pepper
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Amy~ thank you so much, I just started doing these today! They are so fun  

Vicky~ yea!! me too!  

P35~   well, come on then, let's go puddle jumpin! The best kind of storm is at the ocean......ahhhhhh now THAT is heaven!  

-SEA
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Nicely done keep doing them and enjoy the fun!!
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addictive form, this haiku is, huh

put a big smile on my face love to play in those puddles too

MORE!
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SEA,
Beautiful, I may try one one day.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
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I hope reading this started the sky to thinking here, it better rain soon!  Lovely haiku Sea girl.
 
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