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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-11-16 04:40 AM




Forget the red
Forget the white
My pink rose
Is pure delight
~~~
Her delicate fragrance
Lingers on
From break of dawn
Till dusk is gone
~~~
She flowers in abundance
Puts on a full show
In the full sunlight
Is where she like's to grow
~~~
I feed her, talk to her
Give her a little drink
She rewards me generously
With her petals pink





Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2000-11-16 05:48 AM


Beautiful words to describe the pink rose tracie..lovely expression of your preferences I really enjoyed the poem very much....ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-16 07:08 AM


Tracie~
Both the poem and the lovely, lovely rose graphic
certainly speak of you.
Wonderful is what this is.
A refreshing thought to start the morn.
~*Marge*~


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Kethry
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3 posted 2000-11-16 07:14 AM


Tracie,
Ditto to what Marge said. A reflection of you indeed.
Write on
Kethry


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Rex E. Alford

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-11-16 09:17 AM


and delightful this is ...
sweet read from a sweet poet ...
(yellow is my fav)  
pretty pink poetry Tracie-girl
later-blooming-rose-gator
jm

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
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~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Charisma
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5 posted 2000-11-16 09:21 AM


pretty delight rose.....
loved reading this wonderful poem, and enjoyed it thoroughly.

Charisma

Sven
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6 posted 2000-11-16 12:23 PM


Nothing like a pink rose on a Late Fall day. . .

Wonderful tracie  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


SEA
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7 posted 2000-11-16 12:29 PM


Tracie~ so very pretty, I enjoyed reading this one   -SEA
tracie66
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8 posted 2000-11-17 03:00 AM



ethome~
So glad that you enjoyed this. The graphic came before the poem with this one, I was checking some graphics out and saw this rose and the poem flowed from there. I must add though I do love pink roses and roses in general...thay are my fav kind of flower  
~hug~
Tracie

Margie~
Thanks hon   I'm glad this was a lovely way for you to start your day  
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Keth~
Hi  
Thanks hon
~HUGS~

Janny~
the yellow comes in second, my next fav colour...they are all beautiful
Thanks for reading
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Charisma~
I'm so glad you really enjoyed the read..thanks  
~HUG~
Tracie~

Sven~
So right my friend  
Thanks for reading, always appreciate it
~HUG~
Tracie~

SEA~
Thanks sweetie, always pleased when you read one of mine  
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Aimster
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9 posted 2000-11-17 10:12 AM


Tracie--

this rose is as lovely as the poet behind
the poem. simply beautiful my friend. i
enjoyed this very much. take care.

~amy~

tracie66
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10 posted 2000-11-18 05:57 PM



~Amy~
Oh you are so sweet little one....thanks
~Tracie~
~HUG~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



insect
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since 2000-04-22
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11 posted 2000-11-18 07:49 PM


Love this!
For you


Very pretty poem
The fragrance is flowing
insect would like to participate
Land on your flower and pollinate

Attracted to a flower so beautiful
Sweet nectar to drink till full
Such a yummy delightful drink
Then maybe sleep in soft petals of pink



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