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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2000-11-16 02:38 AM


Night Memories

In the night dreaming
Dreaming of love without end
Reality bites


Anchored

Can you touch the wind?
High upon the mountaintop
Chained to memories


Awake Alone

A brush of your lips
Feather soft upon my own
I awake alone

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-11-16 05:46 AM


I just sent an email to you and I come back to passions and what have you done but written some beautiful haiku ..write on sweeheart... I appreciate these a lot more after our talk.......take care ..ethome...
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-11-16 07:13 AM


Paula~
Just such lovely thoughts wrapped up in
this trio of Senryu.
They are just perfect.
I particularly enjoyed Anchored.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-11-16 07:23 AM


Paula, what a triplet of terrific you have penned here. I love haikus and these are particularly nice.
write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2000-11-16 09:21 AM


Well done.  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


SEA
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with you
5 posted 2000-11-16 09:24 AM


Paula~ each one was a tug on my heart this morning......I liked them very much.   -SEA
OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
6 posted 2000-11-16 09:38 AM


Excellent work, and all three seem connected somehow, can't make up my mind wether its reality or dreaming. Maybe I ve read one poem too many lol. More haiku from you (please).

Regards
Olias.

Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2000-11-16 11:44 AM


ethome...hi...yes got your email...thank you...you know this is new to me lol and OOHHHHH the structure...teehee

Lady Marge...ok you are calling this senryu...now I am confused...but Im glad you enjoyed whatever it is I have written LOL...thank you

Kethry...something new for me...and I wasnt really looking to write them...they just sort of happened...thanks

Interloper...thank you

Sea...Im glad you did...anytime I can tug your heart I feel I have done something right...thank you

Olias...LOL...I know the feeling...one too many poems...as for more...I dunno...this is not the way I usually write...we will just have to see..thank you


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2000-11-16 11:53 AM


Paula, these are lovely...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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