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one candle burning |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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The cold came in and touched my soul I feel it always feel its hold and I wander to the glass and breathe the warmth of summer's past... expelling circles of the fog dreaming of a yuletide log and all the hopes of spark within-- the wish, the prayer to live again... Solstice she my dampened friend-- the dark of days shan't do me in... I watch I wait I bow my head knowing loving light instead... one candle burning all I need a flicker's yearning plant of seed--- a solitary whim of need... a spark of life dispelling dread the boast of birth from something dead. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetLittleSerenity~ I see the glow from candle flicker burning burning burning Wick holds steady at the ready glowing glowing glowing Raindrops from the sky or teardrops from eye cannot stop the flame of ~ yearning burning *Little love, you lit my fire with inspiration !  Have a wonderful day. I'm sending sunshine to fall on your shoulders. Love ya' ~*Mom*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This flickers like a gentle candles flame in my heart..lovely!!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The light of a single candle is enough to lead us home from the darkness..enough to warm a heart that has been touched with ice...and enought to ignite the soul with hope and love again...exquisite writing S'en, you have kissed this one with hopes lips...Love ya my friend~ [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 *One candle* is quite enough.great poem. Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and all the hopes of spark within-- the wish, the prayer to live again... ********* tonite I'll light you one single candle and I'll see you there in its warm glow tonite we will heal in the hope of its light for tis in the flame ... all that is true will show tonite I'll light you one single candle and I'll say a prayer for inspiration to call then pen a lullaby for serenity to come and a wish for peace and contentment for us all **********  thank you to a butterfly for the helping me light this candle  "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Dear Serenity ~ I see hundreds of candles at your doorstep ... go take a peek. Actually, we, here, have lit hundreds of candles in our minds for you and have sent words aloft in your name. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This piece is beautiful!!! The flow is gentle and fluid. The images are vivid. This is my first post, and after going through everything to get to post, I've already forgotten your author name, but not the effect your piece has had on me. I also enjoyed the comments so far. It shows me others were affected by your talent as well. Thanks for the read. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ I'll light a candle and make a wish with you........for the warmth we both seem to be needing. -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Liked it!!!!!!!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity, you are amazing........... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are all simply the greatest!!!! Love to you all, and thank you, with all my gratitude for your warm hugs and prayers---and Jan? beautiful!!!! That graphic is just like me!!! (I'm a bit of a fire hazard at times....grin...) |
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aurora rain Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 90 |
beautiful, yes indeed. i have a vendetta against short lines (as yours are) but you made them work. i love candles. i've written poetry about them, but i find when i write about them, i'm far too cliche. but you, my dear, have succeeded in not being so. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Ser-- this is BEAUTIFUL!! i sit simply in awe....excellent! Take care. ~amy~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed, enough |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Today would not be the same without this repost. Light a candle for her on this day. I miss you like crazy lady on this Southward Equinox.  Carpe' Diem |
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