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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Forevering ~*Marge Tindal*~ She walks the night of widowed halls down corridors of memoried walls touching tenderness of recall framed mementos of forevering It isn't supposed to be like this reposed in yet undiscovered bliss beckoning heat of lovers kiss to fall from lips - forevering No-glare glass gives not a clue no reflected memories due no - no - no - repeats imbued Oh, where does she find forevering ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge that's such great work! I don't know where you keep coming up with them but your just simply a fountain of poetic charm ..grabbing the reader and charming him/her right out of their poetic boots.... I love the idea of this lonliness and the forevering ........clever stuff!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--What a wonderful way you have to say what is in your heart...this one is a sigh..love the word, forevering! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, Simply beautiful, a touch of genius. That loneliness so well identified is reminiscent of the reality of the many who endure it. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I just love it when you roll up your sleeves and do some serious poetizing  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
What a word...what a description...Marge you've placed me back in "Awe" once again! This was wonderful! You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Forevering, what a beautiful word. You have done it justice. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, this is a beautiful piece. I don't get to read very much in here, but every time I open one of your posts, I get a big treat! Thanks for sharing. False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ I must that I like the idea of you without your boots ! Thank you so much. Martie~ I think a *sigh* from you, tells me all I need to know about hitting the mark with this one. Thank you, my friend. JD~ Yes ... and it is necessary to identify it. Thanks so much. Balladeer~ You are such encouragement. Thanks for being you. ButterfliesDC~ Thank you, hon. I just love writing - glad it shows. INot2B~ Thank you so much. I'm so pleased to share forevering with such an appreciative audience. LoveBug~ And I just love seeing your name in my mailbox. Thank you for finding the time for this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Beautiful.......loved it |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is beautifully crafted, Marge. Haven't been in here for a while, and again I read yours and am awed by your talent. Marie~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge you are magnificent... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AlanH~ Thank you so much. Marie~ Yah ! Well you've been missed, sweet lady. Thanks for the nice reply, hon. Hope you're here to stay a while. Karilea~ Sweetie, the light shines back on you ! I have a sneaky feeling you may have sent this one to me on a spirited sigh. Thank you for thinking of me. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge, Beautiful poem...I like the word "forevering" It's all something we seem to do but its cruel to ourselves, what fixedness in wanting things to last forever, but bound in nature, by God (if believe in God) things don't. Nothing wrong with some changes once in a while, but I don't understand why things must die outright, cease, and be taken right away from us. Things are taken away and I wonder why i believe in God still when he never says the reason. Perhaps because I think too much their should at least be a reason when there's probably not. Sorry for going on..been in weird moods lately. Enjoyed this poem much. take care -Poeminister "There is pleasure in the pathless woods there is rapture on the lonely shore there is society where none intrudes by the deep sea, and music in its roar I love not man the less but nature more" --Byron |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ The emptiness and memories echo throughout each line. I can hear them in my mind. Well done my friend. What a lovely word forevering. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Wonderful one. *rereading* gJ -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie~ Tender foreverings, superbly crafted this beautiful piece of yours....love it Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge *Sigh*! an artistic masterpiece and I love the term forevering. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ When we set our hearts on a path of forevering there is the light of hope to lead us. If and when the light goes out - forevering is found in memories. He promised us seasons - not always reasons. Big hugs to you and thank you for your honest comments. LoneWolf~ Thank you, hon. I know you can relate. And isn't it just a beautiful word ? FlyHigh~ Thank you. I hope you enjoy it many times. Tracie~ I'm so pleased to share with you. I appreciate knowing you enjoyed it. Kethry~ The memories written on our hearts are meant for forevering. Thank you for your sweet reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- 'forevering'...i think that's my new favorite word... you've touched my heart with this, my friend. such a beautiful write. love ya, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ I certainly concur on the beauty of the word. It just conjures up the most memorable moments of time and etches them on our hearts. Always so nice to see your replies, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another gem in the dusty pages |
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