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Searching Under A Cloud |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Searching Under A Cloud ~~Daniel J D~~ This amazing feeling surmounts Stumbling along I dismount Into the wilderness of confusion This clouded memory shows no compassion Where do I resume the search For the person that I am, or was The cloud is intense, thick and dark Do I wait till it vanishes And the blue of the sky shines Or the moonlight silhoueting me. If I could wake to another wish Taking away all my pain, in the mist Of the morning calm, so fresh To begin another path, a new light Under no cloud to darken my mind Waking me up from times I was blind Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I think most of us have walked within this cloud a time or two in our lives...you describe the feeling so very well. May you find the light at the end of the cloudy tunnel soon! This is excellent writing Daniel~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
If I could wake to another wish Taking away all my pain, in the mist Of the morning calm, so fresh To begin another path, a new light You know what I think, no - have learned...all of our pain helps create those new paths..and helps us to appreciate them all the more... it can be hard finding them though can't it? Good write Daniel...  KThe wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Butterflies, Thank you kindly. I do hope to wake up and find myself, again. Hard road, but has to be travelled. Severn, Your words are well appreciated, thank you kindly. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ If that cloud won't pass on by come share my umbrella when that cloud cries Take my hand and walk with me we'll find the sunshine I guarantee ! And when the darkening cloud is gone - it's smiles galore from here on ! *Smile* my friend. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Daniel, what I read here is intense...but it may be only to me... so I can only say, know how much I appreciate these words, that they are here because you took time to share them... thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I thank you so much for your warm and comforting words. You are a gift sent from above. I feel a lot better now. Sunshine, So clouded our existence can be. I thank you so much for the support. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
The best cure for getting rid of these clouds I find is physical pleasure--a massage, tis the best way...i would reccomend going to the massage parlor perhaps --takes my clouds away. But thats just me...you might've tried that already...but hope your not that bad that a massage doesn't work! Anyway, hopeing things will look up your for you. Wonderful write. Take care Poeminister There is pleasure in the pathless woods there is rapture on the lonely shore there is society where none intrudes by the deep sea, and music in its roar I love not man the less but nature more |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel...you know I am here my friend...take my hand...I may not know the right path but at least you wont be lost alone...love ya |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Daniel there will be a clearing and the sun will shine once more, I know ~HUG~ Tracie~  < !signature-->Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Daniel, sending  and  to you. be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((warm huge hug))) I know that cloud to well. and this verse sound hopeful, and I wish that you will wake without pain, to begin another path ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If I could wake to another wish Taking away all my pain, in the mist Of the morning calm, so fresh To begin another path, a new light Under no cloud to darken my mind Waking me up from times I was blind |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Where do I resume the search For the person that I am... ========================= Look into yourself ... from whence this verse sprang ... and you will have ended your search. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Poeminister, I appreciate your advice. I am afraid I am not into this sort of cure. Paula, Glad to know you are always there. Love you too. Tracie, Thanks so much. Yes, I do hope that sun shines soon. Kethry, Thank you so much, I am glad so many people care. Charisma, Your support is comforting. At times you just want to close your eyes for a moment, and hope that when you open them again all your problems have vanished. Here is hoping. Interloper, Thank you, I shall take heed of your message. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done |
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