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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-11-15 06:13 PM



My heart and I are here alone
and wondering how you are
Tonight three thousand miles seems like
a universe apart
We’ve clicked onto your letter
and we’ve read each loving line
But just to be with you
would be so fine


My heart and I were wondering
if you miss us, too
And do you see this face in dreams
the way that we see you
We know you read the poems we send
and all the love we write
But do you miss just holding us
at night


My heart and I’ve decided
just to tell you how we feel
And let you know we’ve never
felt a love so true, so real
We’ll wait for you forever
and then on the day we die
We’ll be there waiting
on the other side


l




Follow your dream!


© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-11-15 06:19 PM


Your heart and you did a wonderful job. I bet that whoever knows you miss and love him.
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2000-11-15 06:23 PM


Sunny1,
I'm sure he'll just love this. Nicely done.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2000-11-15 06:28 PM


He knows.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2000-11-18 11:28 AM


~~~ inot2B ~~~
I hope by now that he does.....thank you!!  

~~~ Sy ~~~
Thank you, my friend.....I hope so, too!  

~~~ Interloper ~~~
I guess you're right! How could he not know..all the love poems are for him...


Follow your dream!


Victoria
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5 posted 2000-11-19 06:11 PM


Enjoyed Sunny..tender and heartfelt..

             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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6 posted 2000-11-23 05:51 PM


best wishes sunny   nice poem
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
7 posted 2000-11-23 08:20 PM


~~~ Victoria ~~~
Yes, love has it's tender, poignant moments, sometimes bittersweet. Thank you!!


~~~ Walt ~~~
Thank you, my friend......the best to you also!!


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


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