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Interloper
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0 posted 2000-11-15 06:12 PM


Interloper takes up the gauntlet ~

The fish swims upstream
The hook stops her instinct dead
A family fed

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Live for love. Without love, you don't live.



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ethome
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1 posted 2000-11-15 06:18 PM


Did the basis for this come from an Indian lullaby?   Just kidding!  very good job...ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-15 10:25 PM


small fry yield big fish
casting nets upon waters
big fish fry for us


hey...found the first one last!  This is great...you did wonderful!


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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3 posted 2000-11-16 10:52 AM


ethome ~
I shot an arrow into the air ... and this is what came down.

Sinshine ~
One-upped again.  Shux!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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4 posted 2000-11-16 10:59 AM


Another one I like very much.......I really like this haiku thing! I'm gonna practice!   -SEA
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5 posted 2000-11-21 05:00 PM


SEA - You know you do everything well.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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6 posted 2000-11-24 08:28 PM


you just captured the life of a fisherman within 17 syllables...im impressed
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