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This Morning, Early

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


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This Morning, Early


My cheeks were the color of roses,
flushed by the closeness of you.
That look in your eyes of awareness
edged desire, reflections of two.
In silent stare, I was lost again,
in the space between the lines.
Your words that kissed, to ease my pains
I savored, becoming mine.

I miss you more than you shall know,
I count each loss of smile,
Waiting for the wake up call
in your own artistic style.
The aching began the moment you left.
as I followed the path of the moon,
Last night it glowed a ball of fire
but disappeared, all too soon,

Behind the shades of gray that swirled
and felled me into deep
Of dreams that rose to color me
to warm me into sleep.
Removed the chills that iced my heart
to keep it's life on beat.
It won't be long, you shall return
to eyes, of silent speak.


~Wynter Bliss

**in my present state of mind, I am not too sure if I was inspired by any other than Christopher's  "edge of awareness" phrase a few poems ago, as I had made some mental notes on some phrases of which I used here. If I borrowed or was inspired and you recognize something here, know that I am thanking you for touching me in such a way,that I kept them in mind.(sometimes I find a few unfinished poems and thoughts and can't recall where they came from, if other than my own mind... an age thing I think *s)



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




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Sunshine
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This is quite lovely, and the shape and pattern of your word forms lovely images...

well done...I am glad you were inspired...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



nakdthoughts
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2 posted 11-15-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

thank you Karilea. I am trying my best to  think some happy thoughts, although not too easy at the moment. {{hugs}}

~wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Daniel J D
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3 posted 11-15-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for Daniel J D   Email Daniel J D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniel J D

Nak,
Very beautifully written and very sad. Hope all is well. Cheer up.

"The aching began the moment you left.
as I followed the path of the moon,
Last night it glowed a ball of fire
but disappeared, all too soon,"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
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Deep in the heart


4 posted 11-15-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Good poetry and better therapy.



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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5 posted 11-15-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

lovely words as always NT.. Enjoyed

             ~Victoria~


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- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 11-15-2000 08:25 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Daniel, I am  cheerful, at least I feel I am...I think this weekend, bottom was hit...and the only way now is up...at least I am praying for that, finally.  I will continue to bounce a bit more, I am sure...the big "D" when unexpected does that to you...and since I have never experienced it before, I guess I am doing the best I can. Thank you for reading huggzz

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




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Looking for some quietly inspired beauties this day ... finding the lovely of you among them~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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nakdthoughts
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9 posted 11-17-2005 07:00 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

It won't be long, you shall return
to eyes, of silent speak.


Thank you Marge..funny thing~~ I don't even remember writing this..but then again I forget what I write the moment after I post  them...

They are  diaries in my mind...

Thanks again for  your touch

M
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