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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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No Words Enough.... There are no words enough to translate, the warmth inside of me that emanate, of wonderful feelings that illuminate my day, This must be love that crossed my way. My heart can't find another explanation, that could explain this luscious sensation, the flammable tense when our souls confluent, or the passions that makes this love so intense. How can I show thou that thou are my ray of light, my radiant star in the darkest night, indispensable as the roots of a tree, where would I be without love from thee. I want to share in your sorrow and pain, likewise the heartache that still flames, than I will show what my love contains, and I'll be there to ease your pain. Till eternity I will be there with thou, will bathe thou in sweet love light hue, everlasting yearn will always be abound, in love and care that I have found. Oh how I desire to let thou know, and show thou how my love still grow, with every heartbeat it will increase, in strength of my love that appears. How can I translate the warmth inside me, or show how my heart beats faster for thee, however that I can't find the right words, the love that I feel is truly more worth. Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, Wonderful reflection of love here. Great write, I enjoyed it thoroughly. "everlasting yearn will always abound, in love and care that I have found". Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, I think you found the right words, a lovely write. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
It is a pleasure to agree with Sy...I think you found the perfect words...this is lovely! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Charisma, you romantic devil you!!!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Charisma...what a beautiful write!! you've gone and spilled love and passion all over the page and it's turned into a wonderful poem....I love poems like this they are as indispensable as the roots of a tree! (oh I loved that line)...ethome |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Daniel: thank you for your lovely reply...I am glad that you loved it thoroughly  Seymour: but still no words enough, ... thank you for reading and your kind reply. Butterfly: thank you for reading and stop by, I am glad that you like it. Balladeer: Romantic me???  ethome: yes I loved that line too, cause its so true.....thank you for your lovely words. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Till eternity I will be there with thou, will bathe thou in sweet love light hue, everlasting yearn will always be abound, in love and care that I have found. Oh how I desire to let thou know, and show thou how my love still grow, with every heartbeat it will increase, in strength of my love that appears. How can I translate the warmth inside me, or show how my heart beats faster for thee, however that I can't find the right words, the love that I feel is truly more worth. =============== beautiful charisma...and yes you have found the right words to convey .. wonderful expressions here but when we are consumed by our emotions there arent enough verbs and vowels to say it the way we wish take care jm |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- BEAUTIFUL, my friend! you have done a wonderful job of finding just the right words to express these feelings of love. excellent! hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this is quite beautiful! -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it!!!!!!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Janet Marie: you have absolutely right, and its always a pleasure to read your comments, I appreciate them a lot. Vicky: thank you for your kind reply, I am glad that you like it. Sea: thank you, ... Vandana: I am glad that you enjoyed it. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I agree; you found wonderful words to express these feelings Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you peppermint for your kind reply...I appreciate that a lot. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well chosen words...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you James for your kind reply |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a well-written poem Charisma...very abstract too! Wonderful write! Nathan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you Nathan for your lovely comment, I am glad that you enjoyed it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet romantic write here! |
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