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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-11-15 03:48 PM


Last leaf of autumn
clinging alone in the snow
but autumn is gone


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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1 posted 2000-11-15 03:56 PM


gr8.  Love the thought.  Silly leaf.
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2 posted 2000-11-15 06:30 PM


yes..thats what i was trying to establish..haiku's relate to real life thru nature..you can learn alot if you pay attention to nature..

             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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3 posted 2000-11-15 09:40 PM


Paints a perspective and that's what writers do.....good show!!
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4 posted 2000-11-15 11:49 PM


thank you ethome..nice hearing from you

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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