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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Faun ( My Youngest Daughter ) This Eros child of impart. Stole my heart from the very start A little larger then my glove A six pound dark haired ball of love. Pretty as a faun sent to earth Born a miracle of birth. A pleasure for my lips to touch An armful for my arms to clutch. A living toy a thing of joy A vital doll of coo and coy. She ruled me with a bright of eye That lift my spirits to the sky. And soon became my moon and stars A cup-board full of candy bars. A smile that brought my heart to still A coo much like a whippoorwill. And to this day of years away I still melt when she looks my way. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, PapaPoet~ What tenderness in this kiss for Faun. The light in a dad's eyes shines brightest when remembering ... This is so touching, Seymour. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is so touching Sy...Every daughter's dream...to be Daddy's Little Girl...no matter how old we are! What beautiful memories and rays of sunshine you have shared here...I know that as a daughter she will most definately treasure your words...I hope you share this with her. Absolutely beautiful writing~ |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ah Seymour ~ What a gentle piece, so lovingly showing a father's heart. Just beautiful. Bonnie |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Pretty as a faun sent to earth Born a miracle of birth. A pleasure for my lips to touch An armful for my arms to clutch. ========================== And soon became my moon and stars A cup-board full of candy bars. A smile that brought my heart to still A coo much like a whippoorwill. And to this day of years away I still melt when she looks my way. ================= Sweet Sy... ya just need to be kissed for this one... this is soooo perfect ...what a sweet read hope ya put this one in a frame and give it to her ... it will make her winkiewinkies go blinkieblinkie  later-ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis-gator jm |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most lovely rendering of a father's heart... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you so much. *L* Butterfly, Your comment reads like a butterfly, so pretty. BSC, Thank you Bonnie. JM, I did for my daughter KIm and I wiii for Faun Thank you winkiewinkie. Karilea, Thank you *L* |
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