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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Old photographs of lovers fondest moments An Autumn walk through colored leaves of romance The kiss a smile can bring, Oh how I love these things... when I'm with you. A midnight sky with Northern Lights a dancing. The frost king's art on sunlit windows prancing. A favourite song two sing, Oh how I love these things... when I'm with you. A seaside stroll by lazy waves at sunrise A gentle wine to warm the soul by firelight. Sidewalk cafes in spring, oh how I love these things... when I'm with you. A rattling wagon on a moonlit hayride A sailboat sailing on the bay at twilight. An icecream sundae fling, oh how I love these things... when I'm with you. Baby it's these simple things we remember best... and when I'm with you... I love to tell you... I love you. [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ethome, I can tell this is from the heart...a lucky partner you have! I love hayrides too  ) thanks for the reminder |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ethome~ ohhhhhh I do like the feel of this, such sweet times, such warm memories......very nice...  -SEA |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Old photographs of lovers fondest moments An Autumn walk through colored leaves of romance The kiss a smile can bring, Oh how I love these things... when I'm with you.' Oh, absolutely wonderful! Love the romance! Great write!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ethome, thank you for these wonderful smiles.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ethome--beautiful feelings from your heart make all things beautiful when you are with, the one. She is lucky! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ethome* Memories like this are pure gold...what a beautiful weave of your heart. Nodding in agreement with Martie..a very lucky lady indeed! Exquisite writing~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Passing Shadows for your thoughts much appreciated..ethome Sea thanks for the like the feel of it comment. Thanks Snowpants for loving the romance of the poem I appreciate your kind words |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ethome, this is so full of warm and tender love. I love this one, such beautiful thoughts, such wonderful memories. This is pure and shining with love. Really excellant work. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Martie glad you were able to enjoy it always good to hear from you....ethome Thanks for the wonderful heartfilled comments Butterflies ..much appreciated Marsha thanks for such upbuilding comments I really appreciate it when you drop in to read......take care ...ethome...... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Baby it's these simple things we remember best... ================= And I'll remember this poem ... Author, author! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
ethome, Another good write... and thanks for the email laugh... I wanted to say something "HELP" but wasn't quite sure how without offending, but RJ & myself got a laugh. Your alright. Thanks again... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this romantic piece....sweet and tender. excellent penned Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Interloper for the comment...the author is me ethome.....take care....ethome Thanks for taking the time to read Dale I appreciate it and I'm glad we all could get a laugh out of the whole thing...thanks ethome. Charisma thanks so much for your kind words ....ethome |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is a very nice testament to love. Marie~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
ethome, these are such beautiful thoughts and memories....a wonderful romantic endeavor...thank you |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
ethome, Beautiful affections and memories expressed in this poem. Nicely written. take care, -Poeminister "There is pleasure in the pathless woods there is rapture on the lonely shore there is society where none intrudes by the deep sea, and music in its roar I love not man the less but nature more" --Byron |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you for the kind reply Marie much appreciated. Thanks Balladeer for dropping in love your latest... Hooked.... funny how some poems really get to a person more than others... Thanks poeminister (love that handle) sounds like the blues to me or facsimile...thanks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ This is just so puuuurrrrty ! I love romantic little notions to jump-start my day. Thanks for the lift ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Marge I like the way you spell pretty it's got sooooo muuuch feeling ...thanks for taking the time to read...always appreciate your comments...ethome |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooo how gorgeous! |
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