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Damage Assessed

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Gemini
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0 posted 11-14-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gemini

You said I damaged our friendship by speaking the honesty of,
I was not very subtle when I told you I had fallen in love.

But is this a damage beyond repair?
Is it wrong to have hope someday you'll be there?

To pick up the pieces I lost by losing you,
Since you've been gone, the hollow empty I feel has damaged me too.

So, is it repairable, or do I just walk away?
Because when I said I loved you, I believe you were in my heart to stay.
© Copyright 2000 June Schultz - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 11-14-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

It sure takes two to make a complete relationship....can't be onesided ..never works...but some men can be such fools when a woman expresses her true feelings and instead of handling the situation with some respect for the person who's pouring their heart out they turn away to protecting themselves from being embarrassed..go figure eh! Hope it works out for you...ethome
Gemini
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2 posted 11-14-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

ethome-Thank you, you seem to understand. I still can't help but feel that maybe someday...
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good question
 
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