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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2000-11-14 06:53 PM



    Stairs To Heaven

     ~~Daniel J D~~

Loving
      Giving
        Caring
          Crying
            Seeing
              Praying
                Accepting
                   Forgiving
                      Repenting
                         Rejoicing
                            Admitting
                              Tolerating

                        



Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2000 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-11-14 07:04 PM


I like this but I'm lazy, where is the elevator.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-11-14 07:07 PM


JD-
this was so beautiful. loved the
style and format, but the words
are what touched my heart. wonderful
write!
take care.
~amy~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-11-14 07:13 PM


Daniel that's a real nice layout of a set of stairs and if those ones don't go to heaven then there isn't any that do ....great idea!!
Good work!!

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2000-11-14 08:03 PM


Daniel* Outstanding!  I really liked the way you did this...such simple thoughts really...but so many find them the most difficult steps they will ever take...Excellent work~
Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2000-11-14 08:36 PM


Inot,
The elevator is there you have to find it.

Amy,
Thank you so much, it is a simple path, but many find it hard going. Cheers.

Ethome,
They all lead to heaven. Thanks.

Butterflies,
Pleasure to receive such compliments from you. Thank you kindly.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

6 posted 2000-11-14 09:40 PM


This is an original jewel.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
7 posted 2000-11-14 10:12 PM


Kathleen,
You flatter me, I am red as a red carnation. Thank you.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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