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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-11-14 06:28 PM




Moving On


Remembering all the beautiful things
we did together,
the love we shared,
the fun we had,
the spats,
the bloody fights,
make-up time,
those fabulous nights of
oh gee, my gosh, WOW!
Remembering the kisses,
and the hugs,
the missing...
when you were out of town,
at work,
or in the next room.
Remembering all the things we were,
that are gone now...
dog puke!
because I caught you with him/her!
Remembering the way
I wanted to break your nose,
dislocate your arm,
rip out your heart,
and then,
remembering those beautiful words...
I love you,
and remembering all that we did,
together,
the love we shared,
and the memories
that'll live in my heart,
till I die.
Remembering  that it's time to go,
to say goodbye,
so long,
be well my friend,
our time has gone.
Remember me
as I'm remembering you...
remembering...
I loved you then.



w. james beard, jr.





[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-14-2000).]
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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-11-14 07:10 PM


JWesley~ You know this is awesome don't you? So very true.....it works that way...... -SEA
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-11-14 07:47 PM


jwesley.....
Oh, yes, this is really awesome!! I agree with SEA..........I love the ending.  


Follow your dream!


Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-11-14 08:52 PM


JW* Memories can keep us warm or chill us to the bone...just depends on which ones you pull out to look at...here's to many warm nights!!   Great work~
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2000-11-15 01:42 PM


Sea - don't know about awesome, but it does
      work that way at times, doesn't it?

Sunny1 - thanks my friend, glad you liked.

BDC - Yep, they can warm or chill, but all  
      go into making you who you are. And          teach; it's up to you to learn.

jwesley

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2000-11-15 01:51 PM


Well damn...you said it all...all the love all the anger all the pain...wrapped up in memories...like spider webs in the corner of your mind
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2000-11-15 03:30 PM


jw-
a fine piece you have wove here
that's for sure. poignant and written
with true style. you have captured your
memories along w/ your feelings quite
beautifully if i might say. take care,
and here's to making new better memories.
take care.
~amy~

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-06-06 08:15 PM


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