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The ultimate union - redux
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The ultimate union - redux |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The Ultimate Union I search for words to convey these feelings that soar in anticipatory flight. I capture and put them forth to make sense out of this sensual chaos. They send images of my heart and set you reeling. I see your coy glances as you draw near. Your sweet lips answer as we melt into one body and savor this moment of purpose, giving and caring; exalted in righteous union. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ this is a sensual little poem you have here........I like it!  -SEA |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is quite nice, Interloper - I'll be reading more of your work..  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ Well, birthday gal, you are always there for me. Thank you. Do you think it too sensual? It was totally redone. Nan ~ Thank you. Not many reading this one. I'll try to do better. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
well, i read, but don't comment much cause i just don't have much time online, but i like this one, it is good, so am giving it a boost  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, wow....  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I search for words to convey these feelings that soar in anticipatory flight. I capture and put them forth to make sense out of this sensual chaos. ================ Your sweet lips answer as we melt into one body and savor this moment of purpose, giving and caring; exalted in righteous union ============= too sensual...never... this is excellent..very cool opening verse well done write ...well enjoyed read  take care jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Seldom few know about and have the ability to "send" with the heart. Most wonderful feeling on earth. You've captured it very well! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ This is very tastefully done. I enjoyed the soft sensuality of it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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