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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2000-11-14 02:17 PM


Transfixed by your wondrous thoughts
That are sent to me each night,
I brush my fingers against the cheek
Of your ethereal face.
I take your hands in mine,
And press them to my lips.
All the while my eyes gaze deeply into yours,
A fire burning deep within.
The distance is no obstacle,
When our spirits come alive
To dance among the clouds.
Our shadows intermingle,
As the dance carries us higher and higher
Past the clouds and into the stars
That match our internal fire.


© Copyright 2000 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-11-14 02:18 PM


Internal, eternal fires...flame away...




Karilea
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Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2000-11-14 02:45 PM


There is something magical when two spirits mingle excellent poem.
ethome
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3 posted 2000-11-14 03:56 PM


That is a beautiful soaring spirit flight you took to dance amoung the clouds and what a dance it is...great mental images for the reader's senses to grasp...good stuff I'd say!!!
jwesley
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4 posted 2000-11-14 04:02 PM


Nicely done my friend. Hope you gave it to her...

jwesley

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5 posted 2000-11-14 08:03 PM


A treat for my eyes tonight, MI. Your writing is getting more and more beautiful as is your heart.  
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6 posted 2000-11-14 08:11 PM


Nicely done, Philip... Keep the good work coming... I'm enjoying seeing your stuff agin'...
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