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vandana
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0 posted 2000-11-14 11:46 AM



   These are one of my favorite work I've done os far....And I just want to say thak you all for all your love and support you gave to me....smiles
            
       Just listen to the words,
We're here all alone,
      I will...till then,
wait for right time,
       Promises
You And I were close friends,
     Don't Let it burn,
No,I won't let it burn,
      Whispers
I whispered into your ears.....,
     Breaking
It's breaking,breaking my heart,
    Only you(you're my world)
          You're my love.....,
   If I wanted it to look back,
Do you think it's would hurt my heart?
If I look back again...
    Shine,deeper into your eyes,
Let It shine,
    Lost in music...
   All I need is you,
When I say goodbye...,    

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-11-14 04:13 PM


Vandana,
nice work fitting all those titles together to form a poem.
Be well
Kethry


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Sven
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2 posted 2000-11-14 06:26 PM


wonderful vandana. . .

this is really a great idea that you've come up with!  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2000-11-14 06:31 PM


Hey, that's a super idea...can other's try?

Loved how you did that.

jwesley

(does that mean now we have to think of rhyming titles??)

Charisma
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4 posted 2000-11-14 06:53 PM


Amazing......love the way you show this poem.....well done

((hugs))
Charisma

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