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Lost Soul Surroundings...............................
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Lost Soul Surroundings............................... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Lost Soul Surroundings I will never try to make you understand because I know there are too many sides in this, the element of the soul too short of a corner here and a mirror from the circus over there making false images as you turn that corner ‘round and come crashing to the ground I can only hope you continue to travel through this a-mazing soul searching because all you have looked for is right… here… and I wasn’t ready to give up nor give flight just yet unless you do… regardless that you might want to wing on alone I will wing on then, too albeit in another direction knowing that I once had you safe even though you did not know the elements of this soul Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, HOW CAN YOU DOUBT! How love can you say that you doubt yourself, this is so stunning. And how can you think I don't tell you the truth when I say how great your work is. This is one superb poem Kari, utterly superb. love this one Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The more I read, the more I begin to see the elements of your soul. Magnificent. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ this is STUNNING!!  I love this!  -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Deep, deep, you almost make me weep. One of your best, no contest. *L* Sy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
But. . . we do. . . it's all right there. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
STUNNING, did someone already mention that? yeah! make it ABSOLUTELY STUNNING.... Regards O Karilea, Sudhir |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
your strength and maturity - as well as your tenderness and love - ALL come through so wonderfully - I feel I know you that much better now - and I like who I know that much more |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, little one...doubt what?...{~,^}...thank you... Interloper...you get this...  thank you... SEA...WOW...than you... Sy, sending Kleenex for when I really do...thank you Sir...{~,^}... Sven, perhaps I'm giving too much of me away?...you think?...{~,^} Sudhir, an absolute WOW...thank you... Mr. Yeats, sometimes it is more my stubbornness and just old age...but you made me smile {~,^}...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sunshine what a fabulous write about something as deep as the soul...and the elements of the lost soul and your struggles and endeavours...great penwomanship!! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunshine-Ab(soul)utely supberb! I liked very much. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I am stricken with the incredible depth of this work. You have described the soul perfectly...how sad that some give up the search too soon...  Awesome you are......... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, I think that you have much to give my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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