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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-11-14 05:58 AM




Whenever I think of you
I want to call your name
Whenever I see you
I'm simply not the same
~~~
For all that you are
All that you do
Is simply all I need
Simply
I need you
~~~
You make me feel alive
Make me feel content
Help to keep my world bright
You're surely heaven sent
~~~
Angels must have sent you
To keep me safe and sound
For my life is not the same
Now it's you I've finally found
~~~
So here I am pondering
Tender thoughts of you
How you make my life bright
Help my heart to renew
~~~
Hold me in your arms tonight
Tell me this is forever more
Gently kiss my lips
Close your eyes
Then I'll know for sure
~~~
That indeed the angels sent you
To keep me safe and sound
I'm simply glad they sent you
As true love I've finally found
~~~




Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2000-11-14 06:05 AM


Tracie,
heaven sent.
write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-11-14 07:42 AM


Tracie~
This is just BEAUTIFUL !
~*Marge*~


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2000-11-14 08:24 AM


A love this tender and beautiful is surely heaven sent...as is your gift of weave~
rosepetals25
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4 posted 2000-11-14 08:41 AM


tracie,

    A beautiful poem!  I really really REALLY liked it

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

rosepetals25
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5 posted 2000-11-14 08:43 AM


oooops... ~grins all sheepish~  Sorry for the double post.

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-14-2000).]

Marsha
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6 posted 2000-11-14 08:48 AM


Tracie, I love it, such a beautiful poem. Love it, and 'aint love grand  
Wonderful
Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

SEA
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7 posted 2000-11-14 09:19 AM


~Tracie~

I just love this!
SO pretty!

~SEA

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8 posted 2000-11-14 09:53 AM


Hold me in your arms tonight
Tell me this is forever more
Gently kiss my lips
Close your eyes
Then I'll know for sure
~~~
That indeed the angels sent you
To keep me safe and sound
I'm simply glad they sent you
As true love I've finally found
============
Sweet Tracie girls poetry had been full of angelkisses and granted wishes on stars of late ...Hmmmmmm...
me thinks she is in love...
and her poetry is heavenly inspired  
beautiful Trac...
later-floating on a cloud-gator
jm

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
Lao Tze Tao

~Butterflies are meant to be free~


jlocke
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9 posted 2000-11-14 01:15 PM


This is so sweet.  Beautiful Love.

tracie66
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10 posted 2000-11-15 03:19 AM


Keth~
Hey sweetie
heaven sent tis right  
Tracie~

Margie~
Thanks for stopping by like you always do, I do so appreciate you my friend  
Tracie~

Sweet butterflies~
I love your tender reply, always thoughtful  
Tracie~

Tara~
I'm so pleased you liked...I'm glad I'm not the only one that happens to ((double post))

Tracie~

Marsha~
Thanks hon for a great reply, I'm glad you loved it  
Tracie~

SEA~
Hello sweetness  
thanks for your lovely comments
Tracie~

Janny~
My sweet friend  
Mmmmm me thinks your right  
Tracie~

jlocke~
Thanks for stopping by and checking my work, I appreciate it  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



BSC
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11 posted 2000-11-15 08:41 AM


Just so precious Tracie!!!  Bonnie
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12 posted 2000-11-16 01:04 AM



Tracie,

You have written your heart well my friend.  So sweet, caring, compassionate and wonderful.  Great work!!  

**HUGS**
Love,
Jen


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

vlraynes
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13 posted 2000-11-16 04:48 PM



tracie-
   this is so beautiful and full of love.  
   you have expressed these emotions
   very well...wonderful write.  

   hugs,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



ethome
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14 posted 2000-11-16 05:04 PM


Open and honest love, right straight from the heart, full of warmth and feeling, very nicely done!!
tracie66
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15 posted 2000-11-17 03:17 AM



Bonnie~
Thanks for your lovely reply
~Hug~
Tracie~

Jen~
So glad you read this and liked...I thank you for your kind words
~Hug~
always
Tracie~

Vicky~
Appreciate your comments and for taking the time to read this
~Hug~
Tracie~

ethome~
Your comments warm my heart.....thanks
~Hug~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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