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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2000-11-14 04:28 AM


undecided steps walk
faltering emotions
stilted posture unbending
the waves then strike and lash
out, in
toward
the depths of sentiments
evoking passionate
cries and sighs, past is black
then is forever blackened
thunderstruck and blazing
all fired up, venting
out
rage
mocking retorts of dark
dimmed and miserable
shadows following like
stalkers preying the back
of the one in the front
with defiant pursuing
foot
steps
over cobble-stoned highways
threaded like gears turning
spoke for spoke, eye to eye
in a forever burn of ire
angry
rival

and still I do not know
the meaning of hatred
and still I do not want
to know the feeling of
jealousy or envy
I am sure, yes, I am.

and I hope you are too.

...

© Copyright 2000 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
1 posted 2000-11-14 04:59 AM


I can hear you... I'm a native.

lucky, dale


tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-11-14 06:30 AM


Dear Sud
If only everyone heard your thoughts and understood them...this world would be a better place
floating winged ~HUGS~ your way
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-11-14 06:33 AM


Sudhir,
I see you've gone back to the thoughtful poems, I like verrry much.
write on
Kethry

Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-11-14 01:05 PM


Hey lucky (dale), thanks for reading and coming by...

Tracie, thanks so very much... HUGS back...

Kethry, thoughts are that come back like a chain of events... Thanks so much...

regards to all,
Sudhir

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