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Somewhere someone loves me......

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Balladeer
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0 posted 11-13-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer


Somewhere, someone loves me.
Someone thinks I'm great - Gee Whiz!
I can't begin to tell you
Just how wonderful that is!
Someone out there takes the time
To tell me "I love you."
Somewhere, someone loves me...
What a special thing to do!

Somewhere, someone holds me
In extremely high regard.
What have I done to merit
Such a wonderful reward?
Someone takes the time to look
At things that most don't see.
Somewhere, someone loves me...
How that means the world to me!

My life's gone by unnoticed,
Just a small face in the crowd
And when I speak my mind, it doesn't
Come out very loud.
I stand - but, even when I do,
It doesn't make me tall
And no one ever makes me think
I matter much at all.

But someone, somewhere loves me.
What a glorious surprise
That someone thinks that I am
Very special in their eyes.
It only takes a single voice
To start my life anew...
Somewhere, someone loves me...
Hey, there! Someone! I love you!!!!
© Copyright 2000 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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1 posted 11-13-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

I'm someone...hey...I love ya
Saxoness
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2 posted 11-13-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I couldn't have said it better myself    good job! Big hugs to everyone.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."
ethome
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3 posted 11-13-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

There's always someone that's for sure...I love this kind of traditional rhyming poetry it's a delight because of the anticipation of the rhyme......jolly good show here...I hope you find that somewhere someone and make them someone where...have a nice day...ethome....
Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 11-13-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Awwwwwwwwwe Of course they do!
Loved this little weave of the
heart...it has a fatherly ring
to it    
Martie
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5 posted 11-13-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

my dear deer...here at Passions many love you, it's true...and I am one that do, I do.
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6 posted 11-13-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

It is very easy for me to believe that someone loves you. I am so glad that you have that someone special. I don't know you personally but I have met your HEART
in your poems.
Irish Rose
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7 posted 11-13-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

This is beautiful, absolutely beautiful.


"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen


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8 posted 11-13-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Well let me take a number ...
then I'll get in line ...
Eventually I'll get my chance
to tell you I love your rhyme

I know theres a lot of competetion
so many poets ahead of me ...
All hoping for the chance
to keep you company

I better think of an ace
something to make you walk the line
I know ...Ive got a plan
Ill bring a foot long Spam-marine sandwich ...
and a bottle of wine  
(hehehe)
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9 posted 11-14-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Paula...you certainly are and I love ya, too!  

saxoness...everyone receives your big hugs with pleasure  

ethome....glad you enjoyed. This is the kind of style I enjoy, too. Thanks for the wishes!

butterflies....that's a good girl   Now go to bed! LOL!  

Martie...thank you but the last woman who said I do I do to me got me in a lot of trouble!  

inot2B...what a special thing to say! Thank you very much for that....

Rose...and so is your reply. Very glad to see you...

Janet Marie..you don't need to take a number for anyone and you don't need to bring any inducements, either. (uh, was that on white or rye?)   Thank you, my beautiful-voiced friend, as I have recently been advised  
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10 posted 11-14-2000 02:36 AM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

I got a chain letter in my email once. Actually, I got it in all four of my email boxes.  It was one of those continuing poem-like things that everyone was supposed to add to.  The line was "Somewhere, someone..." and you were supposed to fill in the blank.  That was one of the most touching chainletters I've ever seen.  Some of the things that the someone's somewhere did, said, thought, touched, etc were very very sweet and sad and happy and everything!  And this poem reminded me of that.
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11 posted 11-14-2000 03:38 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

'deer: it's not me...I don't love you..oh no!!!

~pause~

Ok, so I lied...

You know that there is a 'deer devotee in a corner of the Sth pacific right?

(And really - we do have some of the nicest golf courses ok so I expect to see you out here on them one day...preferably having arrived by jet...   )

Hugs on the fine sentiments...

  K



The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S


[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 11-14-2000).]
Sudhir Iyer
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12 posted 11-14-2000 04:59 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

O Sir Balladeer, whatever you do, you do it so good...

great read, muchly enjoyed...

regards, my friend,
sudhir
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13 posted 11-14-2000 05:19 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Yes.
It's true.
I do.
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14 posted 11-14-2000 05:33 AM       View Profile for poetic_imperfection   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetic_imperfection

Now everyone knows....I thought that we were going to keep this secret in here.  Wonderful poem and I liked the rhythm.  
PLY
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15 posted 11-14-2000 06:30 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

'Deer, I'm changing my name to someone right now. I wouldn't want to miss out on this.
write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
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16 posted 11-14-2000 06:39 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I can't even begin to say how much I loved this Michael! What a wonderful flow, and such sweet and endearing sentiments. Funny how we don't know how much we can touch someone from a'far ... and yet, somehow, somewhere if we're really lucky, we do. You've done this so many times for me, I do hope you know it's returned, you are special.

Love ya,  
/Kit
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All right... I admit it... I luv ya too.... But I'm NOT standing in any line... unless of course it's very warm where ever that line is... and I can cut to be up in the front... and of course you'll have to give up that silly "fore" game you play... and I'll be needing a new mercedes... and I like gold jewelry and expensive perfume... and I surely do hope you can cook.....  
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18 posted 11-14-2000 07:11 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Balladeer~

And the fluff n' stuff of it is - me too !  

Pure poetic rhyme from your pen is such a delight.
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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19 posted 11-14-2000 07:26 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

*sigh*........its fine to know that there is someone who loves me.......and yes....I love you too.......

((hugs))
Charisma
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20 posted 11-14-2000 07:35 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

awe...ain't he just adorable?  oh. winky wink. (and he thinks I am kidding, but oh no...I AM NOT.)

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 11-14-2000).]
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21 posted 11-14-2000 08:33 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

oh yeah??? well, WHO IS IT?? that's what i'd like to know!!! geesh  

(lol at nan... "fore"play indeed  )

but about the poem... Goshogollygeewillikers... it's so somewhere else! er ... i mean you're something else! umm.. er... i mean, you're somewhere else! hehe *wink*

didn't someone recently say something about st-st-st-uddering? oh never mind... all i can say is, that's easy for YOU to say but as for me, i'd have a hard time putting something like this in words because nobody would believe me anyway *g
((((((hug))))))))

and besides that....

- all you can ever really ask out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry -
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ugh...how come I'm always the last one to jump on the bandwagon of life?  Hugs, Mike!
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23 posted 11-14-2000 02:50 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

very magical in your rhyme, I sure that love surrounds your mind, when someone shows such love and passion, there's no doubt someone loves you!
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24 posted 11-14-2000 03:03 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

How very sweet.  It's nice to know someone out there loves during PMS  
 
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