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Somewhere someone loves me......
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Somewhere someone loves me...... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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Somewhere, someone loves me. Someone thinks I'm great - Gee Whiz! I can't begin to tell you Just how wonderful that is! Someone out there takes the time To tell me "I love you." Somewhere, someone loves me... What a special thing to do! Somewhere, someone holds me In extremely high regard. What have I done to merit Such a wonderful reward? Someone takes the time to look At things that most don't see. Somewhere, someone loves me... How that means the world to me! My life's gone by unnoticed, Just a small face in the crowd And when I speak my mind, it doesn't Come out very loud. I stand - but, even when I do, It doesn't make me tall And no one ever makes me think I matter much at all. But someone, somewhere loves me. What a glorious surprise That someone thinks that I am Very special in their eyes. It only takes a single voice To start my life anew... Somewhere, someone loves me... Hey, there! Someone! I love you!!!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'm someone...hey...I love ya |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I couldn't have said it better myself  good job! Big hugs to everyone. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There's always someone that's for sure...I love this kind of traditional rhyming poetry it's a delight because of the anticipation of the rhyme......jolly good show here...I hope you find that somewhere someone and make them someone where...have a nice day...ethome.... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Awwwwwwwwwe Of course they do! Loved this little weave of the heart...it has a fatherly ring to it  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
my dear deer...here at Passions many love you, it's true...and I am one that do, I do. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
It is very easy for me to believe that someone loves you. I am so glad that you have that someone special. I don't know you personally but I have met your HEART in your poems.  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful, absolutely beautiful. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well let me take a number ... then I'll get in line ... Eventually I'll get my chance to tell you I love your rhyme I know theres a lot of competetion so many poets ahead of me ... All hoping for the chance to keep you company I better think of an ace something to make you walk the line I know ...Ive got a plan Ill bring a foot long Spam-marine sandwich ... and a bottle of wine (hehehe) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Paula...you certainly are and I love ya, too! saxoness...everyone receives your big hugs with pleasure ethome....glad you enjoyed. This is the kind of style I enjoy, too. Thanks for the wishes! butterflies....that's a good girl Now go to bed! LOL! Martie...thank you but the last woman who said I do I do to me got me in a lot of trouble!  inot2B...what a special thing to say! Thank you very much for that.... Rose...and so is your reply. Very glad to see you... Janet Marie..you don't need to take a number for anyone and you don't need to bring any inducements, either. (uh, was that on white or rye?) Thank you, my beautiful-voiced friend, as I have recently been advised |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I got a chain letter in my email once. Actually, I got it in all four of my email boxes. It was one of those continuing poem-like things that everyone was supposed to add to. The line was "Somewhere, someone..." and you were supposed to fill in the blank. That was one of the most touching chainletters I've ever seen. Some of the things that the someone's somewhere did, said, thought, touched, etc were very very sweet and sad and happy and everything! And this poem reminded me of that. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
'deer: it's not me...I don't love you..oh no!!! ~pause~ Ok, so I lied... You know that there is a 'deer devotee in a corner of the Sth pacific right? (And really - we do have some of the nicest golf courses ok so I expect to see you out here on them one day...preferably having arrived by jet... )Hugs on the fine sentiments... K< !signature--> The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Sir Balladeer, whatever you do, you do it so good... great read, muchly enjoyed... regards, my friend, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yes. It's true. I do. |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Now everyone knows....I thought that we were going to keep this secret in here. Wonderful poem and I liked the rhythm. PLY |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
'Deer, I'm changing my name to someone right now. I wouldn't want to miss out on this. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I can't even begin to say how much I loved this Michael! What a wonderful flow, and such sweet and endearing sentiments. Funny how we don't know how much we can touch someone from a'far ... and yet, somehow, somewhere if we're really lucky, we do. You've done this so many times for me, I do hope you know it's returned, you are special. Love ya, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All right... I admit it... I luv ya too.... But I'm NOT standing in any line... unless of course it's very warm where ever that line is... and I can cut to be up in the front... and of course you'll have to give up that silly "fore" game you play... and I'll be needing a new mercedes... and I like gold jewelry and expensive perfume... and I surely do hope you can cook.....  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ And the fluff n' stuff of it is - me too ! Pure poetic rhyme from your pen is such a delight. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*........its fine to know that there is someone who loves me.......and yes....I love you too....... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
awe...ain't he just adorable? oh. winky wink. (and he thinks I am kidding, but oh no...I AM NOT.) [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh yeah??? well, WHO IS IT?? that's what i'd like to know!!! geesh (lol at nan... "fore"play indeed )but about the poem... Goshogollygeewillikers... it's so somewhere else! er ... i mean you're something else! umm.. er... i mean, you're somewhere else! hehe *wink* didn't someone recently say something about st-st-st-uddering? oh never mind... all i can say is, that's easy for YOU to say but as for me, i'd have a hard time putting something like this in words because nobody would believe me anyway *g ((((((hug)))))))) and besides that.... - all you can ever really ask out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry - |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ugh...how come I'm always the last one to jump on the bandwagon of life? Hugs, Mike! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very magical in your rhyme, I sure that love surrounds your mind, when someone shows such love and passion, there's no doubt someone loves you! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
How very sweet. It's nice to know someone out there loves during PMS  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
 Sprinkling some love dust all over your body haa.... ~Victoria~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice one deer, I'm glad I stopped to read, got a real tickle from it |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You know what, evidently lots of people love you. I'm in the line, ok? Awesome poem. Sandra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's me! I love you |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'M YOURS!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Needing to re-emphasize this thought today~ 'Just a small face in the crowd And when I speak my mind, it doesn't Come out very loud.' I find these words circling ... circling ... circling this day~  Thank you, Balladeer~ I'm sooooo thankful for the archives of many treasures~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you, Marge...I had completely forgotten about this one...gracias for the resurrection |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Someone whispered in my ear, that they thought they loved our Deer! I can't remember now just who, but thought I should tell this to you. Back to the top, martyjo |
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