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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2000-11-13 05:45 PM


Watch the night …

in the
fall of
darkness
you
will
see
them…

the
consonant
notes
from
the
symphony
of my
heart
as
they
are
seized
and
placed
as stars
to
lend
light
to the
evening
sky



Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

© Copyright 2000 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-11-13 05:53 PM


Looking to the night sky with wide eyes and both ears to the wind.  Wow, love the style, the flow, and the content.  Lovely verse and leaves much hope for this cowboy to catch a glimpse.
Poeminister
Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
2 posted 2000-11-13 06:16 PM


A Whisper's Caress,
Like the way it flows from heart to sky, feelings through descending darkness to be spotted by the eye, twinkling above with much love.  This poem is another lovely write and vision.  

take care
-Poeminister


"...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Ed

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since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
3 posted 2000-11-13 06:25 PM


Whisper - You have lit my evening sky.  Well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-11-13 09:33 PM


Absolutely beautiful!  
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
5 posted 2000-11-13 09:37 PM


A stunning star studded poem...the format
surely added to the gentle flowing effect
that the poem had...perfectly done~

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