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Masked Intruder
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25 posted 11-13-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

Jenn-
I think Ryan would enjoy that last part a bit too much for my comfort.  *grins*

Nan-
I think that would bother him just a touch too much. lol

Ryan-
Go chew on a pencil!  Oh wait, you obviously don't have any, cuz if you are a writer then I am the God of Literature.

Dakota
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26 posted 11-13-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for Dakota   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dakota

Masked Intruder~ First may I say you did a superb job of conveying your feelings....

And second about all the Ahem! witty banter ... well lets just say if as much energy were put toward poetry we would have another book to publish already...lol  
Take Care  

Dakota
Ryan
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27 posted 11-13-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for Ryan   Email Ryan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ryan

Hey, what gives you the right to make personal attacks?  You're the one who started this whole thing.  So why don't you take your sorry little butt off to whatever corner you came from and stay there for the next year or 50.  Then maybe you'll be able to write a worthwile poem (or accept the truth that you didn't).  We don't need this kind of crap taking up the bandwidth that could be better served holding my masterpieces.  Oh, and yeah, btw, how's the car looking?  Last I heard, pretty nice.

Ryan


I like too many things and get all confused and hung-up running from one falling star to another till i drop. This is the night, what it does to you. I had nothing to offer anybody except my own confusion.
óJack Kerouac

Temptress
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28 posted 11-13-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

ALRIGHT! I'm gonna count to three!!
ONE.............TWO.........errr...T...DARN! I lost count!!

ROTFLMAO@Ryan and his car comment! Thats another point!

Ryan?? About enjoying it..something you wanna share with the group, here?    
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29 posted 11-13-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

Ryan, even though my car is all smashed up it still looks ten, no twenty times better than that purple piece of metal that you drive!
Ryan
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30 posted 11-13-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Ryan   Email Ryan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ryan

Yeah, I'll remember that next time I'm driving my purple car and your red (is it still even red?) hunk of junk is sitting in a ditch on the side of the road.  And hell, while we're at it, my car could write better poetry than you've been posting lately.  Wait, of course my car could write better poetry b/c yours isn't even poetry at all.

Ryan


I like too many things and get all confused and hung-up running from one falling star to another till i drop. This is the night, what it does to you. I had nothing to offer anybody except my own confusion.
óJack Kerouac

Jenn E
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31 posted 11-13-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for Jenn E   Email Jenn E   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn E

On My.....this is amazing.....simply perfect writing.  I felt every word, every chill......everything.......So vivid with colors of your heart. Hauntingly beautiful.....An amazing write........WOW.......
Jenn E
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32 posted 11-13-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

What gives me the right? First of all, I am a god compared to your useless form.  You are the amoeba that floats in the puddle stranded in the middle of a University parking lot, living in the beer, gas, and barf of college kids.  Only you would go to a school with purple as the school color.  I don't know what you were thinking! OH wait, yes I do, you don't think! Ever!  It hurts your poor mind to perform such a futile attempt at existance.  And what's this about your car writing poetry?  Are you saying that your car has a larger brain than you do?  I might agree with that.  But that would mean that your six squirrel power purple machine might think ahead enough to break down before it gets to that demeaning school that you call home.  
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33 posted 11-13-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Ryan   Email Ryan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ryan

Yes, if you are a god, I might just might go pray to Satan to embrace my soul so I can avoid an eternity with you.  And go learn to read so that maybe then you can understand what I'm saying and not make a complete idiot of yourself (moreso than you really are) by misinterpreting me.  I hope those big words didn't confuse your little petty brain.  I'm so sowwy if they did.  Wait, NO I'M NOT.  Go back to skipping and flunking classes and stop wasting our time with your crap.

Ryan


I like too many things and get all confused and hung-up running from one falling star to another till i drop. This is the night, what it does to you. I had nothing to offer anybody except my own confusion.
óJack Kerouac

Nan
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34 posted 11-13-2000 10:27 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

RYAN..!!!

Let's see you post something - show our new poets yer stuff, my friend - It's a whole new audience for you since you've been here...
ethome
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35 posted 11-13-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

The arguing only helps to overload an already overworked server and that's not fair to the rest of the members here...thanks..ethome
Ryan
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36 posted 11-13-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Ryan   Email Ryan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ryan

Lol.  I do believe our little game is over.  It's been fun.  Time for this to sink away into the depths of that scary place called the archive.  *grins*  Oh, Nan, I occasionally throw some things out for viewing in CA.  Maybe I'll bring a few over here sometime soon.  Like I said, it's been fun.  I'm outta here for now.

Ryan


I like too many things and get all confused and hung-up running from one falling star to another till i drop. This is the night, what it does to you. I had nothing to offer anybody except my own confusion.
óJack Kerouac

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37 posted 11-13-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

Yeah, I guess we should have told everyone we're about best friends, eh Ryan?  LOL  Oops! *grins*
doreen peri
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38 posted 11-13-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

ROFL!!!!!!!



ryan... oh never mind..... ((((hug))))

and MI - geez.. you'd think you were fighting with security gaurds or something trying to find a getcherself outof a tree you got stuck in

ummm... well anyway... here's to ya!!! BOTH!
*smooch*

and Nan... can't you DO something about this kind of thing in the forums??? after all, you ARE a moderator, aren't you? good grief

of all the poets on the planet
MI and Ryan, they can man it!
  

thanks for alleviating my pain... lol... i needed this *g


- all you can ever really ask out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry -
wayoutwalt
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39 posted 11-13-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

and here i thought with 37 replies this poem must be good but boy was i wrong yuh... talk about an easy reply heheh hello names walt your poems are pretty good so far new guy...hahahahahah yuh
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40 posted 11-13-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

Wayout-
Are you calling my poem bad?! Huh, are ya?  You see what happened the last time that happened!?  ROTFLMFAO!!!!!  Oh, it hurts....
desperado
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41 posted 11-13-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desperado

hmmm well personally I thought it was a very good piece.  nice to see you around MI  drop me a line if you get a chance.  you know my numbers and stuff.  

I don't know what all is going on back and forth so I won't get involved.  but last I checked polar bears couldn't fit their fat asses in a car to drive it, so therefore I'm willing to take 4 to 1 odds that MI's car looks better.  any takers?  

Ryan
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42 posted 11-14-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for Ryan   Email Ryan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ryan

Lol.  At least polar bears don't lose traction on ice and spin out of control.  *grins*

Sorry, that was cold.  But I bet you can take it MI.  *grins some more*

Ryan


I like too many things and get all confused and hung-up running from one falling star to another till i drop. This is the night, what it does to you. I had nothing to offer anybody except my own confusion.
óJack Kerouac

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43 posted 11-14-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Effigy

Nice I like this alot. Haunting visuals.  
Nan
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44 posted 11-14-2000 07:31 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Green Polar Bears have to live in the forest... and they have less traction...

... and I have proof that Raccoons frequently get stuck in trees..

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45 posted 11-14-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

*taking notes*
Geesh...Hope ya didn't have to call the rescue squad!  
Gemini
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46 posted 11-14-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Masked Intruder-I think I lost the forest for the trees, but getting back to your poem, I think it was beautiful, filled with sadness and emotion and very well said, have been there once or twice myself marked days with sadness and emotion.  Peace and hugs my friend.
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wow
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48 posted 08-20-2005 01:22 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I miss your writing and I sure miss the old days (well the old days I know anyway) you have older days.

The pain in this piece was the definition of alone, and you nailed it!
 
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