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Victoria
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You haunt me like the moon haunts the night
with each tender thought.. a bell softly tolls
your shadow breathing in the moonlight
you render me..helpless..out of control

What is it which draws me close to you?
your lips I taste,like earth tastes the dew
your aura within my soul shines bright
a flame upon the candle of the night

An orchard of passion is growing inside
succulent feelings swirling about
blushing like grapes..ecstasies wine
Yes..i love you and there is no doubt

You haunt me like the moon haunts the night
Would you like to dine in instead of out?



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  





[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-14-2000).]
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Victoria~ I really liked this one very much!   -SEA
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2 posted 11-13-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

I really like that Victoria..."You haunt me like the moon haunts the night."  right away I can visualize the roamntic rays a full moon spreads across the land...the kind of moon the coyote howls at....magical writing here my poet friend....nice job indeed!!

PS I'd rather dine in!!
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SEA..thank you so much ..nice of you to stop by today..  

ethome..Great..would you mind picking up a pizza on the way..haa...everything on it..  

               ~Victoria~

              


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  



[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-13-2000).]
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Victoria, I like this a lot. The moon can represent so many things to the romantic heart.  And dining in is so much nicer..with the right man, of course.
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hi there sandra..so nice to hear from you tonight..yes even candlelight and pizza is wonderful with that special person....

                 ~Victoria~

            


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With the right man....popcorn and flashlights can be romantic   This was excellent Victoria~
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thank you BDC...YES..you can say that again ha..so true..

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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