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You Haunt Me |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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You haunt me like the moon haunts the night with each tender thought.. a bell softly tolls your shadow breathing in the moonlight you render me..helpless..out of control What is it which draws me close to you? your lips I taste,like earth tastes the dew your aura within my soul shines bright a flame upon the candle of the night An orchard of passion is growing inside succulent feelings swirling about blushing like grapes..ecstasies wine Yes..i love you and there is no doubt You haunt me like the moon haunts the night Would you like to dine in instead of out? < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ I really liked this one very much!  -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like that Victoria..."You haunt me like the moon haunts the night." right away I can visualize the roamntic rays a full moon spreads across the land...the kind of moon the coyote howls at....magical writing here my poet friend....nice job indeed!! PS I'd rather dine in!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
SEA..thank you so much ..nice of you to stop by today.. ethome..Great..would you mind picking up a pizza on the way..haa...everything on it..  ~Victoria~ < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Victoria, I like this a lot. The moon can represent so many things to the romantic heart. And dining in is so much nicer..with the right man, of course. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
hi there sandra..so nice to hear from you tonight..yes even candlelight and pizza is wonderful with that special person.... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
With the right man....popcorn and flashlights can be romantic  This was excellent Victoria~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you BDC...YES..you can say that again ha..so true.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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