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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-11-13 03:24 PM


I want to fall up

come with me, let’s fall up
and not into something deep
I think it’s time to do it different
before we go to sleep

for if we fall up, and play in clouds
what a treat we’d find
all our problems now ant-size
all bad habits left behind

fall up with me, not in love with me
you don’t even have to be in like with me
but if you come fall up with me
wouldn’t that be heavenly?

Come let’s talk to angels,
and help them in the choir
now I don’t have much of a voice
but if you sing bass, I’ll sing higher…

and let’s make faces out of clouds
of animals or some such things
and while we play our game just right
let’s whip up some sun-rings

since we’re here, let’s grab God’s ear
and tell him how pleased we are
for this imagination he’s given us
c’mon with me, let’s fall up this far!

What is this? You don’t want to play
and fall up with me to far away?
and you’d toss my dreams to reality?
for the truth you’d rather see?

But can’t you see? There, in the skies
where up and up is in the blue?
why don’t you try just once with me
and let me fall up with you.




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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1 posted 2000-11-13 03:34 PM


Sunshine, you always brighten my day.  And today, you warm my soul.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Kethry
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2 posted 2000-11-13 03:56 PM


Sunshine,
falling up, what an amazing concept. And heavenly in its presentation.
write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

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3 posted 2000-11-13 04:26 PM


Please come with me and we'll fall up
We'll reach the stars and never stop
And, as our upward spiral goes,
We will not stop till Heaven knows.

Our spirits on our upward rise
Will leave behind the earth and skies.
Ascension for eternity
As we fall up - just you and me.

An amazing theme by an equally amazing writer,,,,,thank you , Karilea  

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4 posted 2000-11-13 04:33 PM


reminded me of a poem by shel silverstein called fallin up o yuh i likes the way you went with it yuh yuh
Martie
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5 posted 2000-11-13 04:39 PM


Karilea--I am in like with you...and I do want to fall up...what a wonderful idea, but I'm a girl...is that okay?  Smiles here.
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6 posted 2000-11-13 05:39 PM


Kari, This is a beautiful and original concept, I just love this idea of falling up. Wonderful, to go scampering through the clouds, and riding rainbows. Love this one and you know I do.
Take care
                Majestic Marsha
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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7 posted 2000-11-13 08:15 PM


Delightful, Karilea! You've definitely put my thoughts in a higher realm! Thanks!

Denise

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8 posted 2000-11-13 08:18 PM


Falling UP is most definately the only way
to fall...this is excellent! I loved the
display of imagination and heart in
this...very Sunshine...very  

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9 posted 2000-11-13 08:23 PM


Hey! That's great!  Unique, creative, and poetic too.  What a combination.  ***applause *** sunshine...I'll "Fall Up" with you, anytime (and probably like you too.

jwesley

Nan
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10 posted 2000-11-13 09:05 PM


Above the Clouds... Where the sun is always shining...
Sunshine
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11 posted 2000-11-14 08:31 AM


Oops, look what happened...this fell up!

Thank you everyone, for reading...I have a very giggly muse this week...she's really tweaking my mental images...

have fun!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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12 posted 2000-11-14 08:38 AM


Sunshine,

     Oh I like this!  Such nice warming fun thoughts on this dreary rainy morning I have deal with outside.  Thank you for adding a little sunshine through the clouds today.



~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

ethome
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13 posted 2000-11-14 08:38 AM


Sunshine I always knew that at some point you would try to defy gravity and head for the heavens....please inform everyone else not to try this at home...I think you're the only one that can pull it off...and you don't even have to be in like with me to know that..I loved this one!! such imagination you draw up after a holiday....take care...ethome
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14 posted 2000-11-14 09:24 AM


Wonderful, so uplifting and original!  I don't know why we are afraid to just let go of gravity.

Corinne

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15 posted 2000-11-14 09:32 AM


~Yes Sunshine,...that WOULD be Heavenly,...as is this poem of yours. Enjoyed mucho mam! Thank you. *Peace.
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16 posted 2000-11-14 10:01 AM


Sunshine, what an original concept, and delightfully written. Thank you ~

Rainydays

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17 posted 2000-11-14 12:23 PM


LOLOLOL...{~,^}...isn't this such a fun way to play through the day...oops, up...

[thank you my friends...]


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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18 posted 2000-11-14 01:36 PM


you never cease to amaze me - (jumping into my balloon~G~)
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19 posted 2000-11-14 01:54 PM


Second to falling in is falling up. Lovely!!!
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