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Interloper
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Deep in the heart


0 posted 11-13-2000 02:03 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Interloper


How I hunger to look deep into your eyes
(Your love nourishes me; addicting nector)
I feel my lost heart soaring into the skies;

To feel my heartís rhythm, yes, even the skips,
(Your love clothes me, protects me in every way)
while I savor the sweet softness of your lips;

To hold you gently in my arms as we kiss,
(Your love caresses me like a fine spring mist)
we give ourselves completely to that sweet bliss;

To share a love so overwhelmingly true,
(Your love is my Gibraltar giving me strength)
and to share that pure love with no one but you;

To hear you whisper those words of love to me,
(Your love is the soft whisper that stirs my soul)
knowing that you and I shall always be WE.
© Copyright 2000 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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with you


1 posted 11-13-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Interloper~ making me swoon today   I loved this   -SEA
Dee
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2 posted 11-13-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Interloper,

To hear you whisper those words of love to me,
(Your love is the soft whisper that stirs my soul)
knowing that you and I shall always be WE.

Such sweet sentiments, nicely written.
Dee



I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand
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3 posted 11-13-2000 03:25 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

Lovely poem.
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4 posted 11-13-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Interloper...you are interloping into many hearts today...

quite smoothly I might add...

I enjoyed each and every line of this...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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5 posted 11-13-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

SEA - You make me feel soooooo good. You have read all my schtuff ... need any TUMS yet ( )  Thank you sweet lady.

Dee - The first time I've heard from you.  Thank you for reading and commenting.

Poeminister - Your comments are not lightly taken. Thank you.

Sunshine - Your brilliance lights up my poor attempts at verse.  Heartfelt thanks.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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SOFT SWEET SIGH


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.
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7 posted 11-13-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Stunning, perfectly romantic.
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Whisper -
That "soft, sweet sigh" just melted me.  Phew!

catalinamoon -
What a beautiful image your name brings to mind. Thanks for the "stunning" and I will continue to strive for perfection.  One of the nicest comments I've ever had.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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9 posted 11-14-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

InterLoper~
I like this piece.
Very tenderly done.
And I quite agree with some others -
It has *swoonability* !
~*Marge*~


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Marge ~
"Swoonability" ... now there's a fine compliment.  And from such a talented person.
Thank you.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

dragonpoe
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11 posted 11-15-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

A great piece, classicly written, with precise attention to meter and rhyme and an endearing message of the passions of love.
Enjoyed it lots   !

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
ethome
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12 posted 11-15-2000 01:16 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Great resounding metaphors tied immediately into a summation of the meaning of each one.. I wonder if Marge knows whether that is a real word  swoonability....this is a very good poem!!
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'To share a love so overwhelmingly true,
(Your love is my Gibraltar giving me strength)
and to share that pure love with no one but you'

Wow.  Beautiful work, Interloper!  Got me all caught up in it now!!  Love it!!

sp  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...
Interloper
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Dragonpoe ~
Shux.  Now you are getting me just as red as Sunshine does.

ethome ~
Wow!  Many heartfelt thanks.  I'm flabbergasted.

snowpants ~
Thank you, thank you, thank you.

You might like to know that the part in parentheses are thoughts that have not been, but should be, spoken.




Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Martie
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15 posted 11-16-2000 12:25 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Interloper--this is very beautifully done..and ethome..I'm sure that swoonability is a word...at least now it is....so is swoonable.
Charisma
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16 posted 11-16-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

this was so romantic......really swoonable..
love it.

Charisma
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whoosh!
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18 posted 08-20-2005 01:24 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I thougth I would bring back up the favorite I had read before, to inspire to get that pen of yours writing more than a senryu   This was incredible romantic, and you sir, are the master in the department!  I would like to see you and Enchantress write together or Greeneyes maybe?
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