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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-11-13 10:45 AM




You Complete My Soul

The simple touch of your hand
Against the curve of my face
Reveals more than you can say
I see the love in your green eyes
And it comforts me more than you know
Making me feel safe.
The simple sound of your voice
Makes my heart sing out loud
With the happiness I feel
In having discovered you
Your kind loving ways
The emotions you express
Makes my heart swell with love
Loving you more than I
Ever thought I could love
You complete my soul
You lift my spirit
You fill my life with something
So simple and yet so complex
Love.

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~~Tara aka rp25

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-13-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
dragonpoe
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1 posted 2000-11-13 11:15 AM


Soft, gentle, honest. One of those tokkens of fresh love, when the heart is all wild and giddy.

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2 posted 2000-11-13 11:17 AM


Ahhhhhhhhh, beautiful.  Your emotions carry through beautifully.   Leaves one with a soft happy sigh........Thank you for sharing!

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3 posted 2000-11-13 11:49 AM


I enjoyed this poem greatly.. thanks

Mick


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4 posted 2000-11-13 11:55 AM


Well done!
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5 posted 2000-11-13 10:43 PM


just like this poem. . . simple, and yet complex. . .

wonderful Tara. . .

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rosepetals25
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6 posted 2000-11-13 11:49 PM


dragonpoe -   Yep.. giddy and wild..that is how my heart has been for the past 8 months   Thanks for stopping in.

dreamkeeper - I'm more than glad to share. I'm glad you liked it.  And I like your name btw   Thanks for reading.

Mick - I'm glad you enjoyed it.  

Interloper - Thank you!

Sven - Aww thank you Sven.  Coming from an amazing poet as yourself, that is quite a compliment. ~hugs to you~

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-13-2000).]

dgvarner
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7 posted 2000-11-13 11:57 PM


yes..love is very simple..yet complex...    this is really nice  

hugs, dg


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8 posted 2000-11-14 01:47 AM


Simplicity at its best is often the most gratifying.  Luvdit!
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