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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2000-11-12 05:37 PM





If I should wish upon a star,
will heaven put me where you are?
And deep within black velvet night,
will we become as points of light?
If I wish and you do, too,
will all our dreams of love come true?
And will we get a chance to love,
as destined by our star above?
I wish I may, I wish I might
be in your arms and held so tight…
I wish that I could fly to you,
and make your wildest wish come true…
Tonight, I’ll wish upon that star,
and know you’re wishing…
where you are…




I would like to thank Kitty at Fullmoon Graphics for the wonderful artwork she provided. It's a great site with beautiful work, and well worth a visit!
Go to: http://www.fullmoongraphics.com




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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-12 05:40 PM


This is most beautiful, my little Sunny1...but you knew I would say thank you, didn't you...

lovely...


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



Sunnyone
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2 posted 2000-11-12 05:43 PM


~~~ Sunshine ~~~
I'm always honored when you read and enjoy my words, as I hope you feel the same when you see my replies!!  Thank you so much...now go make a wish!!  


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Marsha
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3 posted 2000-11-12 07:01 PM


Lil sis, Hi you, this is so beautiful, I really love this one, but you know I'm a sucker for stars. This is truly amazing sis, you never fail to delight me. Wonderful, totally wonderful. I love this
Take care
                 Bubbles
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Sven
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4 posted 2000-11-12 09:41 PM


Beautiful. . . just beautiful. . .



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunnyone
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5 posted 2000-11-12 10:27 PM


~~~ Bubbles ~~~
For some reason, I can picture you wishing on a star......you are a true romantic, big sis, and there's nothing wrong with that!!
Thank you.....and check out the Fullmoon page...you'll love it!!  

~~~ Sven ~~~
Thank you, my dear friend......that is a true compliment, as you have an eye for the beauty in life!  


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Victoria
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6 posted 2000-11-12 10:47 PM


beautiful as always Sunny.. so nice of you to grace us with your lovely visual poetry ..

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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7 posted 2000-11-12 11:26 PM


Sunny1~
Very, very lovely.
The graphic is lovely and I'm very familiar with Kitty's work
as it's all over the Internet pages.
She's very talented.

Lovely together, they are.
~*Marge*~


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Sunnyone
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8 posted 2000-11-12 11:38 PM


~~~ Victoria ~~~
Thank you.......the poem fell out of my pen when I saw Kitty's background. I enjoy writing to pictures....I love art.  

~~~ Marge ~~~
Yes.......I agree.....she has a marvelous talent, and I'm happy that she agreed to let me borrow her work for this poem. Thank you for coming by to say hi!!  


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Paula Finn
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9 posted 2000-11-13 02:11 AM


If I had one wish my wish would be...to give you to you wishes...one million and three
Sunnyone
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10 posted 2000-11-13 09:28 AM


~~~ Paula ~~~
Thank you, twin, and I would share them with you!!  


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Robert Joseph
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11 posted 2000-11-13 09:38 AM




Sunny,  this is purely charming,  who doesn't love the stars?

Robert Joseph

Sunnyone
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12 posted 2000-11-14 01:34 PM


Robert Joseph...
Isn't it nice to know that no matter how far away someone you love is...you both look up into the same sky, and wish upon the same stars??  Thank you, my friend!!  


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ethome
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13 posted 2000-11-14 01:41 PM


Beautiful graphics and a beautiful poem to compliment them.....ethome
Sunnyone
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14 posted 2000-11-14 07:37 PM


~~~ ethome ~~~
This was such fun to write to Kitty's artwork!  My muse and I really enjoyed this, and hope to do it again sometime. Know any artists who would like to share their art?
Thank you, too!  


Follow your dream!


catalinamoon
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15 posted 2000-11-14 11:02 PM


Sunny this was so pretty, and sparkly, gave me an almost happy moment.
I wish on stars all the time, they ignore me, but I still try.
Ken is a phenomenal artist, by the way, but I don't think you want to write to his art. LOL
Luv, Sandra

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