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Maybe I could take your heart
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Maybe I could take your heart |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Maybe I could take your heart < !signature-->Show it tenderness Hold you in my arms awhile Your face softly caress ~~~ Take you to a place With no worries or the like Hold you there forever In ecstasies delight ~~~ Maybe I could take your heart Show it tender loving care Hold it in my own sweet heart She's longing for yours to be there ~~~ Your day's would be filled with happiness Laughter and tender kisses Your night's never lonely Your head filled with my sweet wishes ~~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, this is so good, Oh how I love this one, it's so full of promises and it's wonderful. Beautifully written, with your special talent. Happiness bubbles through this, and I really love it Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Just love these thoughts. It's so softly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
MM~ Glad you liked, your comments to generous sweetie but I do so appreciate them ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Margie~ I always appreciate you taking the time to read my work and I appreciate every word you have to say  Love ya ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tracie, this is so sweet....{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful love! Written with a gentleness, truly beautiful |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to take a heart to such a place. . . wonderful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
tracie- such lovely and heartfelt thoughts you've penned here. very beautiful... hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ this is soft and gentle and so very beautiful -SEA |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, This was so well written my friend. Soft and sweet throughout each word. *sigh* Lovely visions come to mind with this one. Great job!! **HUGS** LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Your twin here just breezing in for a quick look at what's happening. This is a very tender piece. Very nice Marie~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Tracie, This is perfect, lots of real fellings here. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A wish more tender than this could never be made Tracie...this is beautiful~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunshine~ Glad you enjoed....thanks for reading Tracie~ Dreamkeeper~ Thanks for such a tender reply...appreciated Tracie~ Sven~ My friend, pleased that you read and enjoyed ThanksTracie~ Vicki~ ~HUGS~ back at ya hon thanks for your reply, appreciate it Tracie~ SEA~ Just like your reply...thanks sweetie Tracie~ LW~ ~HUGS~ to you as well my friend. Thanks for reading and sending such a beautiful reply, appreciate it very much Love Tracie~ Mariee~ Hey there my twin 66er, where ya been sis??? I've missed ya So glad you popped by for a look see ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Daniel~ Yes lots Thanks for reading and giving me a lovely response Tracie~ Butterflies~ Hi there sweetie Lovely reply from ya hon...thanks ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You must have been absorbed in soft warm tender thoughts when you wrote this wonderful work of poetry...very good! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
truly a wonderful piece from your heart, love it.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
ethome~ I think I must have ~HUG~ Tracie~ Charisma~ Lovely reply...thanks hon ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely and beautiful.... and all synonyms of these two words.... Regards to you, Tracie, my friend, Sudhir |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great read Tracie...as always |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sudhir~ your reply is so lovely...thanks hope you are well ~HUG~ Tracie~ Jeffrey~ Thankyou for your kind words, they are much appreciated ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Maybe I could take your heart Show it tenderness Hold you in my arms awhile Your face softly caress' So romantic, tracie! Love it!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
SP~ Thanks for a lovely reply Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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