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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WITHOUT WINGS There upon the shores of land Flutter souls adorned in violet crowns Attempting to flee their feathers tease Fearing their journey is not one of this eve These souls now rest upon corals in sand Moments now pass and stars twinkle a path Gazing above they release jovial sighs The gift of the night has given them flight Far and beyond soaring through indigo skies Fleeing past clouds and sparkling stars The moon as their guide into land of forevermore These once wingless souls now united they soar  Daniella  [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There upon the shores of land Flutter souls adorned in violet crowns Attempting to flee their feathers tease Fearing their journey is not one of this eve These souls now rest upon corals in sand Moments now pass and stars twinkle a path Gazing above they release jovial sigh ============== Coco..wow the imagery in this is stunning and has mystic essence to it.. this is wonderful writing from our favorite midnight and after poster  your poetry and replies are sunshine in my day. thank you for that. jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ Your pen holds the prettiest midnight ink. This is just lovely. All a'twitter with the glory of flight. Thank you for keeping me company ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Such beautiful words coco girl Loved this so very much ((talented one)) ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~CocoBaci,...the images that your words paint for me are incredible. Lovely thoughts here. 'Indigo skies',....*sigh*, beautiful. Thank you. *Peace. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dani, I must say that your poet's pallet has come mighty close to the beauty of your heart and soul in this piece. One for my library and definitely one to print and hang on my bulletin board. Exceptionally beautiful write from you and yes my favorite of yours to date. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
such a lovely poem..love the tweety bird too haa... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Janet...My thanks 2U special LadyFriend Marge...It is I who thank you for gracing my nights with your poems Tracie...I always smile bright  when I see you have come by to visit me thank youSpitFire...Coming from you those words I treasure dearly I just love reading your poems nightly Mark...I wouldn't be honest if I didn't say some of the words weaved by yourself, Marge, Janet, Marsha, Sunshine, Balladeer, and Sea have lately put these peaceful thoughts into my mind these days. And once again that bluebird post of yours is absolutely outstanding! Victoria...I'm glad you found it pleasing to read ya know I've always had a weak spot for lil ole 'Tweety', thank you for your reply |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Daniella this is very nice...I was going to name my third child Danielle if a girl and Daniel if a boy...he became Daniel...James |
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