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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-11-12 02:03 AM


"Do You Remember" (our first kiss)

Do you remember our first kiss...I surely do as though it were yesterday
You were sitting there staring at me with those beautiful eyes
And my heart got swept away
And I let down my guard, and released a sweet sigh

I was shaking inside, never felt like that before
So scared to open my eyes, and the dream would end
My heart took on wings and to the heavens it did soar
I heard Angels sing, on enchanting wind

I was amazed at the intensity of the feeling
It almost took the breath from me
With my heart stopped, my senses were reeling
And I wished it would last an eternity

That kiss meant the world to me, it set me free
As your arms wrapped around me, my soul you did release
And I realized all we've been through, was meant to be
And our love was just beginning, never would it cease

I opened my eyes as we pulled a little apart
You tried to say something but nothing came out
But you spoke volumes with your heart
And I at once knew you felt the same as I, there was no doubt

Now here we are months later, and so much has been revealed
Our hearts we share everyday, you are my forever soul-mate
On that day our future with a kiss was sealed
And it was then with destiny we had our first date

Your kisses still melt my heart and set my soul on fire
Passion blazed by love, and a overwhelming desire
Till the ends of time, you will be my only one
And from our first kiss, this beautiful love was begun

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-11-12 02:08 AM


Oh, Amy~
He's one lucky guy to have captured your sweet heart.
This is just precious and endearing.
Best to you, gal.
As always, my friend.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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Dark Angel
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2 posted 2000-11-12 03:38 AM


Yes that special first kiss, how can we forget.
This is beautiful Amy  

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-11-12 03:53 AM


I heard Angels sing, on enchanting wind
=================
well it doesnt get much better than this does it amygirl..
and that last verse...said it all...
this is sweet and endearing kiss from you  
beautiful sincere and SO YOU ...
later-sunshine-gator
jm

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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4 posted 2000-11-12 04:16 AM


Precious and loving sentiments in the poem and sweet passion in the kiss
The spark that lights the fire
Liked this alot
Liz

Marsha
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5 posted 2000-11-12 06:33 AM


Amy, such a tremendous passion and love that shines through this poem.

Our heart we share everyday, you are my forever soul-mate
On that day our future with a kiss was sealed

These lines are my favourite, they just sing to me. I love this one Amy it's beautiful.
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                    
Isn't love wonderful  



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

tracie66
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6 posted 2000-11-12 06:49 AM


Aimster girl the beauty in this is just amazing, you have portrayed you heart here magnificently...well written sweetie  
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
7 posted 2000-11-12 08:03 AM


Awwww you guys are too much...make a girl
blush really   Thank you for your sincere
words...means everything to me! Take care.

Amy  


Poet deVine
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8 posted 2000-11-12 10:51 AM


There is nothing better in the world than a first kiss! Your poem is almost like a kiss, sweet and tender!!!  
snowpants
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9 posted 2000-11-12 01:19 PM


'I opened my eyes as we pulled a little apart
You tried to say something but nothing came out
But you spoke volumes with your heart
And I at once knew you felt the same as I, there was no doubt'

Aim, this is so romantic.  I absolutely love this one, girlie.  Beautiful write, my friend!!  

sp


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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