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snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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KS

0 posted 2000-11-11 09:06 PM


Since you're quite the traveler,
Won't you come around my way
One of these days?
Besides, I told them
I was going out
To find something.
What can I say
To persuade you into stopping by?
Need I tell you
Of the emotional highs,
The excited bliss?
Perhaps when you look
Through a non-dreamer's eyes,
You won't see the such.
So call me a romanticist;
I'm well aware
Of my frequent fervor.
It's the way of the world
To conceal the frivolity within;
All is much too emphasized
On composure.
So what if I am intoxicated
With elation?
Aren't the best things in life
Made of enchantment and delight?
So, wanderer,
Won't you make a path
To my door?


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-11-11 09:16 PM


This wanderer would beat a path to your door to offer you accolades.
write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-11-11 09:22 PM


The wanderer knows but one path.
For all paths lead to one.
A journey that must be traveled alone.
All signs but a blur at a snails pace.
Moments weighted as steps drag
Dreamily forward.
Until the final fork is encountered.
Leaning to either direction unsure
The chosen path will converge
With the one not chosen.
A merger of certainty.
As the wanderer knows but one path
And all paths will lead to your door.



Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



peppermint35
Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
3 posted 2000-11-11 10:52 PM


"Aren't the best things in life
Made of enchantment and delight?"


Yes, and some of the very best, enchanting and delightful things include your writing

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-11-11 11:35 PM


Kris--

just must say i LOVE this! dontcha worry
the "wanderer" will find thier way to your
door...i'm sure of it   wonderful poem
you have penned! take care my friend.

~amy~  

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-11-12 10:46 AM


The wanderer would be totally lost if a visit to you were not in order.  What a lovely verse from you and what wonderful feelings of the hopeless romantic trapped inside so many of us.  One of your best for sure my friend of the diamond and blue pages.
snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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KS
6 posted 2000-11-12 01:14 PM


Kethry:  thanks for stopping by!  I'm glad you liked it!  

Ron:  well, thank you, my friend, for the poetic reply.  Much appreciated!  

pepper:  awww, thank you!  you are too kind!  I'm glad you enjoyed!  

Amy:  well, my friend, I hope you are right there.  I'm so glad you could stop by and enjoy!!  

Mark:  now, is that so?     Anyway, thank you, my friend, for your kind words.  I'm glad you like it.     

sp


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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