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Love's Escape
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Love's Escape |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
"Love's Escape" My love waits on the green of the newberry bush to flower my love will fall, marine, from out this bluestone turret tower Then my love will dance aloft within an eastern emerald shade heather hair of silken soft upon the moss of midnight's glade And my voice, in love, will cry strong hands on ivory nape fingers trace each orchid sigh along the skin of love's escape Rainydays |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
brought the ole senses alive liked it |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very lovely raindays..enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Beautiful music this made for me Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Walt, thank you. Sometimes our senses are more alive than others...thanks for reading. Victoria, thank you for your lovely response. peppermint35, I'm glad you heard its music...thank you for letting me know. Rainydays |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Then my love will dance aloft within an eastern emerald shade heather hair of silken soft upon the moss of midnight's glade And my voice, in love, will cry strong hands on ivory nape fingers trace each orchid sigh along the skin of love's escape =============== this is very beautiful poetry RD, you have painted many very lovley images.. etching them vividly for the reader, doing so in a few well written verses. unique poetic vocabulary choices add to its graceful beauty. well done indeed take care jm |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Thank you, Janet Marie. I appreciate your kind words about this piece. Rainydays |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Definitely my new favorite of yours and that is no easy task and also the reason that ALL of yours go into my library. Probably one of the most beautifully written pieces I have ever read. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Loved this never read anything like it. And yet so very beauiful Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What beautiful phrases...I really love the quality of the structure and the words...... I think this is one of your better poems.... "my love will fall, marine from out this bluestone turret tower." Beautiful!! |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Mark, I'm glad you like this... thank you. Maria, thanks very much for reading, and for letting me know you enjoyed it. ethome, thank you. If this is one of my better ones, I hope the best is yet to come. You're very kind. Rainydays |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So vivid and appealing to the senses. Love is great, isn't it? Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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