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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-11-11 10:06 AM



The Beauty In these Pages


I've been told I have a talent, a special skill that I can do
I didn't realise I could do anything until I sat and talked to you
It's not a spectacular skill, I can't run fast or jump really high
It's not that I can accomplish back flips or reach up to the sky
This thing I do it's really nothing much, I'd say it's not hard at all
I woundn't say it's a particular talent that's at my beck and call


If you like I'll tell you, my talent is that I let my praise run free
I am the applause section, I cheer and shout out with glee
For when I see your works displayed for me, see the beauty here
I think it's magical the way it can quite suddenly just appear
I'm always pleased to see them, I think they are all so fine
Each and every one is amazing how I love those words of thine


Each poet has a magnificent talent, their own words are so true
And as I watch their lives unroll I often ponder could I be you
My words might not be so very special, my heart I don't always show
But your words are like an enchanter's spell, I wonder if you know
That you have captured me, I'm a prisoner held in chains it's true
All the beauty in these pages keeps me bound I'm enslaved to you


Mushy Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

© Copyright 2000 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 2000-11-11 10:27 AM


AND Marsha...
You DO have an amazing talent...that big heart of yours that comes shining through all of your poetry and replies. Passions is a wonderful place with many beautiful hearts and souls and we certainly wouldn't be the same without you hon. i grow to love this place more and more everyday...and it's because of special people like you. beautiful write! i'm sure many others will be touched as well.

take care.
~amy~

EagleOne
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2 posted 2000-11-11 10:28 AM


Well you can certainly take credit for some of the beauty in these pages.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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3 posted 2000-11-11 10:37 AM


Tis I who applaud YOU, for being such a wonderful reader...without you, we would cease...

and you DO have a way with words...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



jwesley
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4 posted 2000-11-11 10:42 AM


Nothing "mushy" here my friend. Your words grace these pages just as everyone else's do, both as a reader and especially as a writer.
Wouldn't be the same with you g...but then, don't even want to consider that.

jwesley

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5 posted 2000-11-11 10:45 AM


Marsha, this is great. But we are all members and thus enslaved with each other, including you. Don't sell yourself short. You fit in here because you are one of us.. a Passionate Poet!  
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6 posted 2000-11-11 11:00 AM


Mushy,
You certainly are one of us and you write beautifully.

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7 posted 2000-11-11 11:04 AM


Marsha~
Your poetry matches your personality just perfectly !
And you'd have to be aware of the love that comes back to you
from the friends who read your beauties.

Love n' hugs
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marsha
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8 posted 2000-11-11 11:44 AM


Amy, thank you sweetie, I do appreciate it, and I do thank you for your generous heart, and for being such a sweet friend.
                Mushy
Eddie, thank you very much

Kari, thank you love, but you know what I'm like I'm never convinced that I can write anything.

Jwesley, thank you truly, and I'm not planning on going anywhere else. (I'll restrain myself to add a flip comment)

Sharon, thank you very muchly I do so love the company here you know.

Seymore and I thank you too, one of the things I adore about Passions is the tremendous love that is here for all.

Marge, that is so sweet thank you. And you are quite right I do feel the love here.

I'm off to blub now,
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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9 posted 2000-11-11 12:04 PM


Marsha...sweet lady...you do have a gift...and a precious one at that. Its not everyone that can see the good in everyone and always pick up on it. Your kind and generous heart is a blessing I cherish each and every day. And yes your poetry is beautiful as well.
Marsha
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10 posted 2000-11-11 04:55 PM


Paula, thank you, you are so sweet truly. I didn't write this though for you to thank me, I wrote for you all here. As I say I'm just the applause section, who loves the poetry here. Thank you again Paula.
Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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11 posted 2000-11-11 05:05 PM


Thank you for writing this, you are truly a sweetheart.
peppermint35
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12 posted 2000-11-11 11:53 PM


Your talent shines in this write as in so, so many others

Thank you so much for all you do, you're quite a star!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

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13 posted 2000-11-12 01:01 AM


Hugs2U
Smiles2U
PoetFriend
MUAAAAAH on cheeks
MushyMarsha we lubz ya


Marsha
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14 posted 2000-11-12 04:56 AM


Kathleen, thank you most sincerely, I do sp love the smiles and the warmth here.
                    
Pepper, you are far too kind to me, you really do have a magnificent talent. I thank you for your words. and I applaude your spirit.                         


CoCo, thank you very very muchly. And I love being here too.
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                      
< !signature-->

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-12-2000).]

tracie66
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15 posted 2000-11-12 06:30 AM


MM~
You sweet thing   this is so tender, straight from your heart and it's how we all feel about each other's work...well done on a great piece
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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16 posted 2000-11-12 06:37 AM


reading is soooo important and inspiring as i've learned of late with more time on my hands.. great render i say
Marsha
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17 posted 2000-11-12 11:18 AM


Tracie, thank you, truly I thank you. Yes it's how I feel about the writers here. Wonderful world we all inhabit, aren't we lucky.
Some people wander for lifetimes in the dark, never seeing beauty in anything. I thank God that he gave me a heart that can see love, and a soul that feels beauty.
                
Wayoutwalt, that is so true, if we take the time to read we are enriched beyond measure.
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                       
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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-12-2000).]

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18 posted 2000-11-12 11:33 AM


I'm sure this was directed towards me right? Of course it was.....my poetic talent, your poetic talent, (balladeer's just learning of course)...LOL...nicely done gal.....
Marsha
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19 posted 2000-11-12 01:22 PM


Toerag, now how on earth did you guess.  
Naturally it was directed to you. You don't mind sharing this with a few others I'm sure.   I'm glad you liked this one.

Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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20 posted 2000-11-13 12:05 PM


You can't write like this and then claim you don't have talent to write poetry! LOL This is great! (And Toe, of course, deserves all possible accolades! *G*)
Sudhir Iyer
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21 posted 2000-11-13 12:35 PM


***APPLAUSE***

regards,
sudihr

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22 posted 2000-11-13 01:59 PM


Hey Marsha, you know, it's funny but I was sure you could write!
This is a special place, I wish I could come here all day, every day.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

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23 posted 2000-11-13 02:14 PM


HUGS!!!  
Marsha
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24 posted 2000-11-13 02:33 PM


Suthern, I thank you most sincerly, I really do. It's just that I can give praise with the best of them but I find it so difficult to see anything to praise in my own.
                 :0
Sudhir, I thank you most truly you know I love your work.
                    
Dee, and I'm convinced that I can't.  
thank you muchly  

Martie, and right back to you girl. Thank you truly.  

Take care
                  Marsha

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25 posted 2000-11-13 03:13 PM


Mushy,
fishing for compliments I see. Well you caught me hook line and sinker. Your poetry is so beautiful and talented and loving. AND without an audience, the performance would be but a rehearsal.

write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

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26 posted 2000-11-13 03:24 PM


Marsha~ that's not fair, you have your very own fan club!! I'm the President!!   You know I loved this....you are the queen of sweetness our dear Majestic Mushy Marsha   -SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-13-2000).]

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27 posted 2000-11-13 03:36 PM


Dear MMM;

Thank you for being you.



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Marsha
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28 posted 2000-11-13 04:52 PM


Kethry, Thank you love, I'm glad you like this, truly I am. I know you all are talented, and that's what this poem was for to celebrate your many talents. And I do thank you for your support.
                
Circe, Oh you sweet thing, YOU do know that I'm one of your biggest fan, not the President of OSCAR's because I'm just the one passes their comments on. I think they are having Big Dave, not sure, but if they did choose me I'd be honoured. I do thank you loads.
                     
Interloper, thank you very muchly  
Take care
                  Mushy Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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