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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
glimpsed through cloud cover, full moon over Disneyland - laughter rings below. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beki dreams of holiday Disneyland my favourite place though I've never been Loved your Haiku. Be well Kethry< !signature--> Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Passport to laughter, ticket to new adventures - my annual pass. I love DIsneyland, have had an annual pass for 5 years, go quite often but last night's visit was unique and truly new...they have put snow machines atop the buildings on MAin Street and after a brand new specially for Christmas fireworks show, the speakers start spouting "White Christmas" and suddenly it is SNOWING on Main STreet....think southern California, 20 miles from the beach...and SNOW!THAT was the TRUE haiku moment LOL Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed the poem  |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
READ ME! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How wonderful! Snow at Disneyland...wish I could go see it (and I'm sure our midwest and eastern members will wish all their snow was at Disneyland in about 6 weeks!) |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
It was awesome indeed. Thanks for reading, Divine |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I have Disneyworld about 10minutes from me here in Florida, and I've heard some speak about the snow they have also, you may have inspired me to go check it out. this is my first winter down south. thanks . Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is neat, Beki... I lived in Orlando and never made it to Disneyworld... but I visited L.A. for a weekend and found my way to Disneyland... It's the original, after all...  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nicely done |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
childrens laughter ..a beautiful sound.. good job beki... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done Beki...great subject! |
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