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At Sunset
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At Sunset |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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Brown shaded sunset Casts a lustrous shadow Across a red tinted forest Of beautiful hair, As lashes descend so slowly Into peaceful slumber. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Masked Intruder: ah this is beautiful - a lovely read  Roniece |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow, how do you do that? Painting a vivid, powerful image with so few words. I'm impressed. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You shared a beautiful view through your weave...would take me pages to attempt to say so much and then I'm afraid it would still lack the stunning beauty that this holds. Excellent writing!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
MI, tis a lovely portrait, this... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Simplicity is so often the key to communication and tender expression...you've done this so well. Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! It's nice to see you here again!  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
mmmmmmmmmmmmm nice old time passionater |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Lots of imagery wrapped up in a beautifully small package here, M.I. Well done. Michael |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I still didn't capture all that I saw in that moment when she drifted off to sleep. So hard to express in words the passion of a human face. |
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