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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2000-11-11 01:40 AM


Upon The Breath Of A Whisper…

With a touch so light
    there are left no impressions

with a kiss so soft
    my lipstick is undisturbed

in a sigh so sweet
    there is love…upon the breath of a whisper



Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-11-11 01:55 AM


WhispersCaress~
Oh YES !
~*Marge*~


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peppermint35
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2 posted 2000-11-11 01:58 AM


How tender and lovely this is

Pepper
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Ram Dass


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2000-11-11 01:59 AM


oh beautiful, just beautiful!   Roniece
Kethry
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4 posted 2000-11-11 02:00 AM


A Whisper's Caress,
How lovely is this? Very lovely indeed.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
5 posted 2000-11-11 12:56 PM


everyone, thank you for the generous replies.
)))

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-11-11 05:55 PM


Enchanting! The title drew me in and I'm so glad I read this!  
LoriJaye
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7 posted 2000-11-11 07:17 PM


*sighhhhhhhhhh*

Lovely, simply lovely.

"A smile is when your inner beauty comes outside."

Poeminister
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8 posted 2000-11-11 08:27 PM


A Whisper's Caress, sweet breath of whisper taking heart like a feather into the air.  Such pleasure it is to glide on to who-knows-where
in love.  Lovely poem.

take care,
Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Ed

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2000-11-11 09:01 PM


so much that resides in simplicity...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2000-11-12 11:02 AM


And now this cowboy rides to find the breeze in which this whisper was left.  Excellent verse and so well impacted in so few but perfect words.
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