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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2000-11-10 10:25 PM


We have never met
We have never kissed
We have never looked into each other's eyes
We have never strolled upon a beach and saw that sunset together
We probably never will
But I know, oh I know, that my love for you is real
That each day spent with you would bring me happiness and laughter
That each night in your arms would bring me unexpected joys
Will it just be a forever dream?
Will it just be a forever dream?


[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (edited 11-10-2000).]

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-11-10 10:35 PM


i hope not i hope all is gotten that is wanted yuh yuh nice!
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-11-10 10:36 PM


Welcome back!! Such tender questions and
thoughts you have woven...hold onto those
dreams and may they all come true for you.  
Beautiful writing Roniece~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2000-11-10 10:46 PM


WayOutWalt:  thank you for your comments - if wishes can come true, then I'm putting up my hand now!  

Butterflies:  Thank you for the welcome back, it's nice that you remembered me  
I've always been in awe of your exquisite writings - thanks for your support of mine  
Roniece

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2000-11-10 11:40 PM


Roniece! I am so happy to see you back, once again you are responsible for putting a simle on my face. You know that the words in this one reach out to me. Hang on to those dreams my friend. I wish you sunshine and smiles, take care!  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
5 posted 2000-11-11 01:36 AM


Roniece,

Is this a relationship with someone over the internet?  It's nicely written. Hope you'll meet whomever it is and that he turns out your wishes.

take care
-Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Ed

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
6 posted 2000-11-11 01:42 AM


This has a lovely flow to it; but more than that; the feelings project so clearly.  I enjoyed the read very much

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2000-11-11 01:43 AM


Eddie:  Yes, I know you know these words well bello....but sometimes dreams do come true - this is my wish for you xx   Roniece

Poeminister:  Thank you for your comments - and yes this is correct, it's funny how one meets someone on 'here' and suddenly one's whole life changes - or wants to change - but one feels like the change would be too great - thank you for reading   Roniece

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
8 posted 2000-11-11 05:50 AM


Roniece,
You are back! You were here before! How did I miss such a great poet first time around? love your work.
Be well
Kethry.


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
9 posted 2000-11-11 05:56 AM


Kethry: thank you so much for your kind words - I do enjoy your poetry too   Roniece
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
10 posted 2000-11-11 06:15 AM


Beautiful tender dreams and emotions ...very nice indeed!
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