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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Sometimes it hurts and I don't know what to do, sometimes it hurts because I' m so in love with you. Sometimes your words hurt me, but do you even care? Sometimes I wonder of my pain if you are even aware. Sometimes I think that you really do love me so, sometimes I'm afraid that you will just leave and go. Sometimes I feel like our love has grown sometimes I hope you know my heart you own. Sometimes this love feels so strong and true sometimes I'm afraid that somehow I'm losing you. Sometimes I feel so alone and afraid...... sometimes I pray, Lord bless this life we've made. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it's the ups and downs of it all yuh great poem |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Walt, most of the time, there is never a doubt.....but darn that sometimes word anyhow.....sigh.... Thanks for stopping in.  On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Gentle Spirit: sometimes, we learn forgetting what we learn....I liked your words, I can tell they are words from your heart - your feelings are very real - keep writing and keep smiling - good things do come to those who wait my friend Roniece |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Roniece, tonight is just one of those nights when that doubt word wants to take control for some reason. Sometimes I just wonder if I should let him see this....lol.. Thanks. ~D~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The perfect view of loves rollercoaster ride! There are always going to be those moments of doubt I think...they fall into every relationship at one time or another...but when it's right and when it's real...those moments are few and far between. Great thoughts and excellent work~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Spirit, the other "d" word -> DoUbT can be quite overwhelming at times... Enjoyed the read PoetFriend, but I must say you've penned the feeling very very well... Coco |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved this |
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