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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 11-10-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gentle Spirit


Sometimes it hurts and I don't know what to do,
sometimes it hurts because I' m so in love with you.
Sometimes your words hurt me, but do you even care?
Sometimes I wonder of my pain if you are even aware.

Sometimes I think that you really do love me so,
sometimes I'm afraid that you will just leave and go.
Sometimes I feel like our love has grown
sometimes I hope you know my heart you own.

Sometimes this love feels so strong and true
sometimes I'm  afraid that somehow I'm losing you.
Sometimes I feel so alone and afraid......
sometimes I pray, Lord bless this life we've made.


On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.


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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 11-10-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

it's the ups and downs of it all yuh great poem
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 11-10-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Walt, most of the time, there is never a doubt.....but darn that sometimes word anyhow.....sigh....  Thanks for stopping in.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 11-10-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Gentle Spirit:  sometimes, we learn forgetting what we learn....I liked your words, I can tell they are words from your heart - your feelings are very real - keep writing and keep smiling - good things do come to those who wait my friend     Roniece
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 11-10-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Roniece, tonight is just one of those nights when that doubt word wants to take control for some reason.  Sometimes I just wonder if I should let him see this....lol..
Thanks.
~D~
Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 11-10-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

The perfect view of loves rollercoaster
ride! There are always going to be those
moments of doubt I think...they fall into
every relationship at one time or
another...but when it's right and when it's
real...those moments are few and far
between.  Great thoughts and excellent work~
CocoBaci
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6 posted 11-10-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Spirit, the other "d" word -> DoUbT can be quite overwhelming at times...  

Enjoyed the read PoetFriend, but I must say you've penned the feeling very very well...

Coco
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loved this
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