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Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2000-11-10 07:49 PM


Hand.

~~Daniel J D~~

Here I give to you
Outstretched, open
Weary, and dry
Take it, feel it

When you hurt
It caressed your shoulders
Embraced you
Wiped away your tears

Lost, it found you
Picked you up, from despair
Fed you, as you trembled
Covered you, warming you

It is tired
The joints ache
Years of caring
Somehow, strong enough
To caress you
In your peaceful
Final sleep.



Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-11-10 07:53 PM


JD~
Wow !
Grabbed my little heart with this one.
~*Marge*~


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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
2 posted 2000-11-10 08:13 PM


Marge,
Thank you, there are many worn but caring hands out there.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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