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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 2000-11-10 06:43 PM



Engulfed

Your hands reach out to touch me,
searing skin with their warmth.
Your fingers softly caress
as I exhale your name
in heated breaths.
The fire burns inside
creating flames
where once were only dying embers
and I smolder and ignite once more;
fueled by your passion.
Your lips flicker and test,
consuming everything in their wake
and within me the inferno rages
until we melt together
leaving me totally engulfed
in the fires of your love.




What lies behind us and lies before us are small matters compaired to what lies within us.
~Ralph Waldo Emerson

© Copyright 2000 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Daniel J D
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1 posted 2000-11-10 07:25 PM


very passionate, very warm, well written.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-11-10 07:36 PM


Hoot~
Oh, I really like this !
These passionate fires are burning brightly this week ...
must be that luna glow !

Great to see you, lady !
~*Marge*~



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Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-11-10 08:35 PM


Ruth, a passionate poem hon, very beautiful  
enjoyed  

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2000-11-10 08:38 PM


ruth miss i love your talent your smokin hot talent yuh yuh
CocoBaci
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5 posted 2000-11-11 01:26 AM


Hoot, a splendid write of passion fires

Thank you for this read tonite.
Coco

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-11-11 03:38 AM


I've been thinking along this line recently...when we meet someone special and their is a connection it really lights a fire radiating with all kinds of emotions...James
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Near golden sunsets
7 posted 2000-11-11 04:16 AM


That almost warmed up this room enough to sleep in.  Pretty close; not bad considering how big the room is. *wink*
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
8 posted 2000-11-11 06:31 AM


Ruth* This is so....wow!  You penned the
passion of love and desire so very
well...amazingly done!!! It's so nice to see
you happy  

ethome
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9 posted 2000-11-11 07:07 AM


Hoot you bring new meaning to the name of this place...Passions....wonderful work of intense passionate fire...excellent read!
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
10 posted 2000-11-13 10:20 AM


Thanks everyone  
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