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Cliffs of Time

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CocoBaci
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0 posted 11-10-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CocoBaci

Cliffs of Time

There upon the jagged cliffs of time
Resides two spirits awaiting the climb
Blessed with a love gentle and pure
As delicate as rose petal with hint of dew

Treasured memories of a lifetime before
Shadow not the journey about to unfold
Two souls knowing their destined worth
To be united before leaving this earth

Their trail behind now a meadow of violets and green
Each spirit of life has their own path it seems
Together forever embracing heavenly skies
Never to part these spirits soar high
Far and beyond the jagged cliffs of time.

  Coco

Note to readers
Have you ever wondered where souls do meet
..At the gates of heaven or jagged cliffs of time..
Today, this thought I share with you in rhyme




[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-10-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 CocoBaci - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 11-10-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Coco,
this is lovely, Such an image of promise and hope.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
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CocoBaci,
Well done, I liked it very much. Yes there is hope out there.

"Blessed with a love gentle and pure
As delicate as rose petal with hint of dew
Treasured memories of a lifetime before
Shadow not the journey about to unfold"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
CocoBaci
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3 posted 11-10-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Kethry, your kind response leaves me with smile thank you dear friend for taking the time to peak at this poem.

Daniel, I'm happy to read you enjoyed and yeah there's always hope if one believes in forevermores... eternity

Coco


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Dani~
I just like this so much -

'Each spirit of life has their own path it seems
Together forever embracing heavenly skies
Never to part these spirits soar high
Far and beyond the jagged cliffs of time.'


I believe in foreveraftering ...
and no matter where we meet ...
it will be heaven of it's own accord.

These thoughts are simply delicious.
~*Marge*~


  


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Coco~ This is it......my favorite of yours........truly love this one......   -SEA
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Ah coco, this was truly such a beautiful insight to a very sweet soul.  Loved it much.  *s*
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i tihnk its a splendiferous oops no its a great idea the jagged cliffs of time . very thoughtful

Say it with me!
"This poem was awesome! Terrific! Totally exciting!"


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Wonderful poem CoCo Soothing.
Thanks
Rich
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I had never given thought to the question
that you have spoke of...but now I shall  
This was a beautiful weave of love meant to
be...lovely thoughts~
CocoBaci
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My dearest Marge, your friendship holds a special place in my heart... Thank you

LadySeaPoetFriend, you must know that what you've just said hold's close to my heart

Gentle Spirit, it's sooo nice to have you visit this post and I send a   smile to you

Walt, you're a sweetie BUT YA KNOW DAT ALREADY

Spiked, I'm glad you found this soothing I was in one of those 'sweet' moods today

Butterfly, as always I'm tickled pink to know what you think and I'm delighted to you also liked it




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this is precious
Marge Tindal
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Because in my heart of hearts ... I believe some beauties should be re-read~
For me, on this day ... this holds a special meaning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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