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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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0 posted 2000-11-10 04:58 PM


"Trust Me"

i now know your story
and what you've been through
now it's my turn
to say some things to you

you are not alone
and never shall you be
for i love you completely
today and for all eternity

i know the pain you've endured
and see the sadness in your eyes
but never will you hear from me
the lonely sound of good-bye

you captured my heart from the start
refusing to let go
so now it's my turn
to make sure that you know

you are my moon, my stars, my everything
gave me a new life, and released my soul
to love and protect you
is my only goal

no secret lies, no hidden agenda
the words i say come straight from my heart
i want to start with you a new life
and for us never to part

you're my blue skies on a rainy day
you're the answers to my prayer
and i want you to know
for you, i'll always be there

so please trust in me
with me, you no longer will cry
and i promise with all that i am
i will never say good-bye

Amy M. Kennedy


[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-10-2000).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2000-11-10 05:10 PM


Amy, this is lovely, truly beautiful, so honest and full of your heart. (It's what true love does, I know)     Love this one Amy truly love it, you have such a shining soul it's a pleasure to read your gems that you leave here. Very well presented love, a real treasure, and your inspiration will love it too I know she will.    
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                      
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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-10-2000).]

Marsha
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2 posted 2000-11-10 05:13 PM


Just wanted to make sure this didn't disappear down the blue page too quickly.  
Take care
               Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2000-11-10 05:13 PM


Amy, these are sweet promises, and you give them so well....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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4 posted 2000-11-10 07:23 PM


'you captured my heart from the start
refusing to let go
so now it's my turn
to make sure that you know

you are my moon, my stars, my everything
gave me a new life, and released my soul
to love and protect you
is my only goal'

'you're my blue skies on a rainy day'

OK, Aim.  MY NEW FAVORITE.  This is absolutely beautiful.  I stopped quoting because everytime I read it, I found another line that I loved!!  Wonderfully written, my friend!!    

sp
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I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...


[This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 11-10-2000).]

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 2000-11-10 07:58 PM


so please trust in me
with me, you no longer will cry
and i promise with all that i am
i will never say good-bye

Your Love, is very lucky to have you Amy  
sigh, this is beautiful!

Maree


"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2000-11-10 08:07 PM


Ya got such a great big heart girl and it shows up when you write some poetry and this one's no different than the others....that big heart shows in your work and you should be proud...ethome
passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-06-26 01:42 PM


you are precious
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