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Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
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Kelowna, BC, Canada

0 posted 2000-11-10 04:31 PM


Oh Sweet love that commands my soul
hear my heart voice the need for forgivness
for tear drenched verses written in pain
deaf to consequence, I feel lifeless.

My depths of understanding
grows deeper with each breath
feeling your souls torment
your hearts struggles and regrets.

Lonliness of my distance
longing of physical touch
I am aware of human nature
for I have felt as such

Feeling and doing are diffrent
that's what peirces my heart
but I am working on forgiving
giving our memories a new start

All of your other reasons
I see an understand
"2" that you love more then life
I respect you for "both" of them

All I know is the love that I feel
and how it will live within
I will remeber "us" and "beggining"
and not what we were in the end

I hope on day your cold is replaced
with the warmth of my arms around you
and if that day never comes
"May you find hapiness in all you do"


I Love You,
All of Me.......and a little more.....
Jenn E



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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-11-10 05:36 PM


"the need for forgiveness, for tear drenched verses written in pain, deaf to consequence. I feel lifeless"
Great words well penned......intense way to start a poem...catches the attention and leads into the verses of heartache and pain suffered by human mistakes....lovely words of internal lasting love never to be totally buried away from reality.....enjoyed this very much!!

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-11-10 07:28 PM


I believe in forgiveness..and you penned it very well.
Janet Marie
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Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-11-10 09:14 PM


All I know is the love that I feel
and how it will live within
****I will remeber "us" and "beggining"
and not what we were in the end****

I hope on day your cold is replaced
with the warmth of my arms around you
****and if that day never comes
"May you find hapiness in all you do"****

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to love and let go with out regret and bitterness is one of the hearts hardest learned lessons ...
but once a heart can truly love this unselfishly...
it heals in its own light ...
you have penned a beautiful heartfelt poem Jenn..
and you already know it touches me.
take care
JM

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2000-11-10 09:24 PM


JennE*
Your poetry is so moving...My heart would
have to be made of stone not to feel the
emotions in this...My best to you dear poet
and please know that there are always those
who will listen and be there for you to lean
on...and your poetry is the light of
healing...walk toward it~

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-11-10 09:25 PM


JennE~
This is tender and heartfelt.

Forgiveness is something we give -
and hopefully something we get.

Sometimes it's slow in coming to us -
but we bask in joy when it does.
And sometimes we're reticent to give it -
but once we do ...
the release is tantamount to a rebirthing of the soul.

This is a wonderful reminder of the gift of forgiveness.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

6 posted 2000-11-11 11:16 AM


forgiving is so hard after we've been hurt. You have a heart of gold to be able to do this. Not many can. i commend you for this. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
7 posted 2000-11-11 12:26 PM


Jenn...your pain is so evident in this...I hope the forgiveness you seek is there for you
Jenn E
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
8 posted 2000-11-13 10:02 PM


Etome* Thank you for your compliments...I take them in the highest reagards.....I am glad you enjoyed....

Pdv* Yes, I believe in forgivness also...Thank you for reading......

Janet* Thank you my friend.....Lifeis not easy but does have to be lived doesn't it......

Holly* I am just so touched that anything I write moves you...or anyone for that matter....I hope it moves him also.......if not it has been a healing power to me that's forsure. Thank you.

Mardge* Thanks for stopping in......your words are so true...and we all need to be reminded to forgive......Thnak you

Ron* Thank you...I must say this is one of the hardest things I have ever been through....but it is life experiences that make us who we are I suppose.

Paula* Not only do I seek it from him but I am needing to give it to him also.......one day ata time..baby steps.......Thank you for reading.

Jenn E

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