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“Know Me”

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Sunnyone
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0 posted 11-10-2000 01:16 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone




You don’t ~~ Know Me ~~, but I know you
these eyes see everything you do
They  gaze upon each word you write
onscreen to mind, within my sight
your thoughts define your heart and soul
my eyes have viewed and so have told
me of your love and of your need
your passion’s fire consumes with greed
my longing ache so deep within
You don’t ~~ Know Me ~~, except as ‘friend’…


You don’t ~~ Know Me ~~, but someday will
you  see my face, but I am still
not picture-perfect-tempting-lust
but in these eyes, a childlike trust
just wanting to reach out and say
that maybe we will meet someday
when standing on two different shores
our hearts will join in astral force
and we will be as one in thought
and letting distance harm us not…


you don’t ~~ Know Me ~~, but what I read
of yours has planted longing's seed
your voice would fall on waiting ear
your smile would spawn enduring cheer
your touch would lift my passion high
and from within, pull out a sigh
your eyes would through my fortress see
the naked truth of all that’s me
your kiss would always feel at home
on lips that won’t leave yours alone
don’t judge me footloose, fancy free
just take some time and
~~ Know Me ~~

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spiked
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1 posted 11-10-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Sunny1 it's amazing how much of someone you can see from that which is written. We expose so much of ourselves with the poetry we write. You've done a wonderful job capturing that sentiment.
Rich
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with you


2 posted 11-10-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Sunny1~ this is fantastic.......I really enjoyed this....I agree with Rich.....he said it perfectly.   -SEA
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 11-10-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunny1,
Good words, good thoughts, good poem.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


4 posted 11-10-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This is one where I say...I wish I had written it...the words flowed, as did the melody of the piece...

maybe, perhaps, I DO know "you"...{~,^}


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ


Sunnyone
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5 posted 11-10-2000 02:06 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

~~~ Rich ~~~
Oh, yes....you are so right. That's why poets expose themselves to the world in their work....it all comes from their inner selves. There's no holding back!! Thank you!!  

~~~ SEA ~~~
Thank you, too!!  Well....I don't know about you, but there's no way I can control my muse!! Ha!!  

~~~ Seymore ~~~
You are such a good friend!! Thank you so very much, and I'm glad you liked my words!!


Follow your dream!

Sunnyone
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6 posted 11-10-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

~~~ Sunshine ~~~
I would guess that you do know me.....and probably pretty well, too!! Thank you for reading this, my friend!!  


Follow your dream!

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7 posted 11-10-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Always enjoy your poetry!!!!!!!!!
Marsha
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8 posted 11-10-2000 05:36 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Lil sis, this is utterly perfect, utterly brilliant. I couldn't write this in a million years, it's beautiful, this is so you. I really love this it's so truthful.
Wonderful amazing work.
Take care
                Bubbles
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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9 posted 11-10-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

This flows so nicely, Sunny. And the words say it all, don't they?
Sandra
Sunnyone
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10 posted 11-10-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

~~~ vandana ~~~
And you know that I feel the same about yours, my friend......the joy of this site is the sharing of thoughts, like a constant buffet for the mind!! Thank you for being here!!  

~~~ Marsha ~~~
Yes.....you could write this......I also feel that your work wonderful, and worthy of the same exact praise!! Thank you!!  

~~~ Sandra ~~~
Yes, I hope the words do say it all! Those are the thoughts. I thank you, my good friend!!  


Follow your dream!

passing shadows
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11 posted 06-26-2004 01:34 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

a wonderful and true write
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